Dragon's Road

by GnomeBob

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This is a story written by a Gnome named Bob. Bob's hobbies are reading and writing action, adventure, and high fantasy stories. His interests include martial arts, physics, human physiology, and he has the complete Dragonball (Manga) and Dragonball Z (DVD) collections. If none of those things interest you, then this story is not for you. If a combination of these interest you, try a reading a chapter or two here. Enjoy.

*This story takes place in Royal Road in the LMS universe and will make every attempt to stay as true to the game as possible, (With a few minor liberties taken here and there for purposes of originality)
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Great like always bob, but....

Your brain is very good for descriptive writing. Usually i skip ahead on paragraphs for a lot of ff and even on some novels coz of the boring/redundant details but not on yours. But your problem is you do ffs halfway and abandon them at some point. Hopefully you can finish em all. I suggest you brainstorm your ideas on paper first and MOST IMPORTANT your END GOAL of your ffs then work to that. Don't waste your talent
ReneeWolf
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 This is a story that I followed over on fanfiction.net and am glad to see there was another chapter here.

Sometimes the mc, Ryuu, seems a bit off fromexpectations but he stays in general character.

This story is interesting. Not as much as your other, but interesting.

BRDman
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an entertaining read, so far, looking forward to the rest of it.

a5tr4y
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i know it's really hard to make good story

but please continue writing.

btw i have read aaaallllll your story even before register in this site

Magoo
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GnomeBob! 'Nuff said.

Great fanfic! The story and character is interesting, and the action is great!

Petrosz
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Great fic and the concept of ki in the story is quite believable,

haitham
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started out good but then ...

When this fanfic first came out , I really liked it but after a while it felt like the story is going nowhere ; no mention of the main character real life , no interesting plot just fighting and the main character never met anyone. I know you may be preparing some great events for the main character but these chapters became boring . I hope you won't take this review as an insult and good luck with your other fanfics

greyturn73
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DEFINITELY WORTH READING, HOPING FOR FASTER UPDATES. ^^
deathbypingvin
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I like it, recommended as one of the better

Very good, similar to DBZ. Very well done. While not entirely original it's has a good style and a funny humor
kingawesome
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It always keep me wanting for more!!!