The Demonologues

by Bizmatech

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Fantasy Female Lead Gender Bender High Fantasy Magic Male Lead Multiple Lead Characters Non-Human lead Portal Fantasy / Isekai Reincarnation Slice of Life Strong Lead
Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content
  • Traumatising content

Indigo woke up in a body she didn't recognize, and a world she didn't know, without memories or even a name to define herself.

Follow her life as she discovers that, not everything happens for a reason, not all bad guys are out to conquer the world, and being powerful doesn't automatically make life easy.

Follow her adventures as she gets drunk with orcs, raids ruins for lost treasure, and chops the heads off hordes of zombies.

Follow her journeys as she meets people, makes friends, and does her best not to kill everyone around her.

[participant in the Royal Road Writathon challenge]

[Winner of the previous Royal Road Writathon participation trophy]

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twinkledandy
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Great start, but falls in a hole.

Reviewed at: Chapter 018

This novel starts off really well; The character is interesting, the world building is fresh and well thought out and the plot moves in an interesting direction at a steady pace.

Technically, the writing is very good; Grammar and spelling are as close to perfect as I've seen on this site, and the author has a consistant, engaging style.

Unfortunately, the story takes an abrupt nosedive after the characters leave the city of Peninsula and the novel changes from fantasy/adventure to smut. Suddenly the MC is running around naked and having sex with groups of random strangers of all races and sexes, all the other female characters are constantly horny, and the majority of conversations turn to things like magic vibrators. It's not even good smut. It's lazy, repetitive anime bullshit that thinks that it's mature, but has all the sublety of a thrown brick.

It's just so frustrating, because the author is obviously talented, and the premise had real promise, but I'm just not interested in reading the adventures of MC fucking her way across the continent. Hard pass.

DrAlt
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Amazing Beginning Then Pacing Lags

Reviewed at: Chapter 026

The main character begins clueless and becomes interesting in the Necropolis arc.  The arc after that is super slow slice of life and has too much about relationships.  Author also dials up the gratuitious smut at the expense of the adventure and I found my interest waning.   If you like those R-rated Japanese slice-of-life stories where they end up in another world and then the MC spends a lot of time cooking, flirting/sleeping around, and weapon training without a life goal, you'll like this later.  

Story started off apocalyptic action/adventure (four stars) and then switched to slice of life with lesbian emphasis (two stars), so if you don't like both you may be disappointed.  Author is good at writing descriptively but writes too much irrelevant detail in some chapters.

GoodOldChap
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I'm ready for adventure Captain!

I like it so far, I can tell the author is putting in the time to put forward some quality writing. Let's hope it stays that way!!

Good Luck

RedThunder
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Binge read it, now I have none left to read

Reviewed at: Chapter 028

Review as up to chapter 28

I have been thoroughly enjoying this book so far and am very much looking forward to more chapters.

The style is enjoyable and easy to read. 

The story

Spoiler: Spoiler

 There aren't any noticeable (at least from what I've see) grammatical errors.

The characters feel fleshed out and real. I especially like how the author has put a lot of thought into the mc, making her  very likable and feel like a real person with emotions , dreams and fears, 

 

 

 

 

SecCcat
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Was going great until....

Reviewed at: Chapter 020

A little dissappointed with the promisquity. If it had been with permanent partners that would have been fine....

Have another 1.5 stars Mr. Author...I still don't like it tho >:(

warownslife
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Cute, social based story

Reviewed at: Chapter 022

Pretty much the best social fantasy I've read. Honestly, I'm kinda scared at how much I want to be and/or relate to indigo at times. 

 

Others say this smut, Bullshit. It's just a more sexual society across the board. But it's not even "porn porn porn" it's fun and still fades to black. If you're calling this smut, you're literally a prude. If you think it's just about sex. you're actually insane. It focuses mostly on indigo's fears and actual problems, like kidnapping and spying.

Raz
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Honestly one of my new favorites!

The style is rather unique and well done; it switches between POVs but unlike many other done in this style there isn’t a jarring transition to un-immerse you.

The story is easy to follow but complex enough to be interesting. It takes some very intersting turns and in many places where the story was liable to get worse, it only got better!

Grammer is Fine, a few issues I noticed but nothing that takes away from the immersion. 

The characters are one of the best things about the story. Each and every one of them has depth and seem like real people. The gender bender tag is well done and although it’s not overly relevant it is an interesting take.

Overall I can not recommend this book more, I truly enjoyed it and ended up binging all 15 current chapters in one day,

hikigayaaaa
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Transgender MC disguised as GenderBender

Reviewed at: Chapter 018

I actually like the story.

And the way the MC talks and act feels like my transgender friend(How she is proud of herself etc). No offense tho.

fwasham
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It's 4 AM and I wasn't supposed to stay up this late

Reviewed at: Chapter 016

cuse you author, curse you. Everyone else stay away, it's a trap to rob you of your sleep! You start reading and poof, all out of chapters and dear god it's late.

Shannifin
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The story starts strong, and the character is interesting. There aren't any terrible grammar or spelling issues. What's disappointing is that it quickly dissolves into hardcore transgender porn. Well written porn, but smut nonetheless. I wanted to read about the magical adventures of a homonculus, not the sexcapades of a horny transvestite.