The Demonologues

by Bizmatech

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Female Lead Gender Bender High Fantasy Magic Male Lead Multiple Lead Characters Non-Human lead Portal Fantasy / Isekai Reincarnation Slice of Life Strong Lead
Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Traumatising content

Indigo woke up in a body she didn't recognize, and a world she didn't know, without memories or even a name to define herself.

Follow her life as she discovers that, not everything happens for a reason, not all bad guys are out to conquer the world, and being powerful doesn't automatically make life easy.

Follow her adventures as she gets drunk with orcs, raids ruins for lost treasure, and chops the heads off hordes of zombies.

Follow her journeys as she meets people, makes friends, and does her best not to kill everyone around her.

[Winner of the Royal Road Writathon participation trophy]

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twinkledandy
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Great start, but falls in a hole.

Reviewed at: Chapter 018

This novel starts off really well; The character is interesting, the world building is fresh and well thought out and the plot moves in an interesting direction at a steady pace.

Technically, the writing is very good; Grammar and spelling are as close to perfect as I've seen on this site, and the author has a consistant, engaging style.

Unfortunately, the story takes an abrupt nosedive after the characters leave the city of Peninsula and the novel changes from fantasy/adventure to smut. Suddenly the MC is running around naked and having sex with groups of random strangers of all races and sexes, all the other female characters are constantly horny, and the majority of conversations turn to things like magic vibrators. It's not even good smut. It's lazy, repetitive anime bullshit that thinks that it's mature, but has all the sublety of a thrown brick.

It's just so frustrating, because the author is obviously talented, and the premise had real promise, but I'm just not interested in reading the adventures of MC fucking her way across the continent. Hard pass.

GoodOldChap
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I'm ready for adventure Captain!

I like it so far, I can tell the author is putting in the time to put forward some quality writing. Let's hope it stays that way!!

Good Luck

RedThunder
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Binge read it, now I have none left to read

Reviewed at: Chapter 014

Review as up to chapter 14

I have been thoroughly enjoying this book so far and am very much looking forward to more chapters.

The style is enjoyable and easy to read. 

The story

Spoiler: Spoiler

 There aren't any noticeable (at least from what I've see) grammatical errors.

The characters feel fleshed out and real. I especially like how the author has put a lot of thought into the mc, making her  very likable and feel like a real person with emotions , dreams and fears, 

 

 

 

 

fwasham
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It's 4 AM and I wasn't supposed to stay up this late

Reviewed at: Chapter 016

cuse you author, curse you. Everyone else stay away, it's a trap to rob you of your sleep! You start reading and poof, all out of chapters and dear god it's late.

Shunji
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The story takes you in and sweeps you away. I couldn't stop reading until I finished what was posted until now (chapter 14).

I almost desperately want more. :)

tormanen
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Yea I'm enjoying this a lot, somehow the whole story just feels more real than any others that i've picked up on this site recently and I can't really pick out why but it's working for me. 

Raz
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My New Favorite

Reviewed at: Chapter 015

Honestly one of my new favorites!

The style is rather unique and well done; it switches between POVs but unlike many other done in this style there isn’t a jarring transition to un-immerse you.

The story is easy to follow but complex enough to be interesting. It takes some very intersting turns and in many places where the story was liable to get worse, it only got better!

Grammer is Fine, a few issues I noticed but nothing that takes away from the immersion. 

The characters are one of the best things about the story. Each and every one of them has depth and seem like real people. The gender bender tag is well done and although it’s not overly relevant it is an interesting take.

Overall I can not recommend this book more, I truly enjoyed it and ended up binging all 15 current chapters in one day,

Mix33
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Very interesting

Reviewed at: Chapter 003

Its a great new story apparently set in an after-the-end setting which is always fun to read about so I've got high Hope's for it, grammar and characters are all fine the writing is also good but the mystery is my favorite part so far

Nifikins
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Absolutely fantastic

Reviewed at: Chapter 016

It’s just great, read it. Seriously, if you’re thinking of reading it, just do it, you won’t regret it. 

lomie0
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Really well made world with believably diverse personalities. Along with a dash of great humor makes this an easy 5 for me. A word of warning, if you are a prude who can't handle the tags, then move on.