Slime and Punishment

by AwakenedKingdoms

Original ONGOING Action Fantasy LitRPG Strong Lead Xianxia
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Traumatising content

Waking up in a white room, surrounded by bones wasn't how Chris planned on spending the rest of his life. He hadn't planned on ending up in an alien laboratory full of caged monsters either.

Inducted into a world with strange blue screens that hint at a world of fantasy, magic, and danger, Chris must survive until the System whisks him away for the promised Tutorial. If help comes too late, Chris risks becoming something less than human, or something more...

 

Note: This story contains comedy as well as grimdark elements, that some readers might find out of place in a grimdark story. If you are one of those readers, this might not be the story for you.

(A more comprehensive list of tags is below.)

Contains: LitRPG, Fantasy, Xianxia

Settlement/Kingdom Building, Crafting

Dungeon Diving, Tower Ascension, Tower Defense

Lots of Combat, Dark/Grimdark Scenes, Comedy/Comedic Scenes

Fantasy, Magic, Post Apocalyptic (later), Sci-Fi (later)

Overpowered/OP MC, Some Monster MC Mechanics, Half-human MC

No Sex, No Harems, No Pseudo-harems

 

Releases: 5 per week (weekdays)

(If you have any problems or questions, feel free to post a comment (or send me a PM), I'm friendly and love hearing from you, I promise I don't bite!)

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 1: The New Dao ago
Chapter 2: Welcome to the Multiverse ago
Chapter 3: Genesis of Blood ago
Chapter 4: What’s a Christopher Hill? ago
Chapter 5: Hybrid ago
Chapter 6: Trolls ago
Chapter 7: Questing ago
Chapter 8: Dark Smoke ago
Chapter 9: Bonewright ago
Chapter 10: Xenocidal ago
Chapter 11: Four down ago
Chapter 12: Mana ago
Chapter 13: Cultivation ago
Chapter 14: Dungeon ago
Chapter 15: Staging ago
Chapter 16: Demoniac Legion ago
Chapter 17: Barrier ago
Chapter 18: Surpasser ago
Chapter 19: Nathak ago
Chapter 20: Shopping ago
Chapter 21: Tutorial. Finally! ago
Chapter 22: Will-o’-the-wisp ago
Chapter 23: Boars ago
Chapter 24: Venom in the mist ago
Chapter 25: Blood ago
Chapter 26: Control ago
Chapter 27: Dao Solidification ago
Chapter 28: Harvesting ago
Chapter 29: A Worthy Quest! ago
Chapter 30: A Hidden Treasure ago
Chapter 31: Hartshire ago
Chapter 32: Beast Horde ago
Chapter 33: A Thousand Claws ago
Chapter 34: Wrecking Ball ago
Chapter 35: Loss ago
Chapter 36: Wounds ago
Chapter 37: Gregor ago
Chapter 38: Poisoner ago
Chapter 39: Downfall ago
Chapter 40: Punishment ago
Chapter 41: Showdown ago
Chapter 42: Regrets ago
Chapter 43: Blibl ago
Chapter 44: Class ago
Chapter 45: Resolve ago
Chapter 46: Thaumic Gate ago
Chapter 47: Thaumic Strata ago
Chapter 48: Option Two ago
Chapter 49: Shrine ago
Chapter 50: Tower Seed ago
Chapter 51: The Manifold Adept ago
Chapter 52: Nemesis ago
Chapter 53: Devil’s Pitcher ago
Chapter 54: Ruins ago
Chapter 55: Spider Golem ago
Chapter 56: Alchemical Attainment ago
Chapter 57: Alchemical Experimentation ago
Chapter 58: Thief ago
Chapter 59: Battle in the Clouds ago
Chapter 60: Varok Prayerwing ago
Chapter 61: Freefall ago
Chapter 62: Thrice Called, Thrice Denied ago
Chapter 63: Amir ago
Chapter 64: New Arrival ago

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A fun story with potential for more.

Reviewed at: Chapter 59: Battle in the Clouds

This one is fun!

It is an interesting tale about the misadventures of a unique MC in a not quite as unique setting.

It reminds me of Defiance of the fall most of all, but isn't quite there in the character department, but seems to understand the tropes and themes of both Xianxia and LitRPG well enough to pull off a similar fusion of the two as Thefirstdefier has managed.

STYLE

The style is fast paced and unobtrusive, it gets to the point and lingers little on minutiae. Maybe a bit to little. The fast paced style has lead to glossing over some things in order to detail them later and doing something's quickly that probably could have been handled better. Instead it chooses to retroactively explain theses missed moments with the plot elements.

STORY

The Story being told so far is good! But not incredibly original. It is following the MC as he adapts and learns about his new situation and tries his best to do what he thinks is right. As I said not incredibly original, but not so poorly done or derivative to be boring or bad.

GRAMMAR

Better than mine.

CHARACTER

The place where the fast pace and derivative story kind of hit their wall. The Characters so far aren't particularly interesting. The main is the only one that has gotten any real attention and for the majority of the story so far he has been essentially drugged, making it difficult to make judgements on his actual character.

OVERALL

Overall it is a fun story, it is still in its early phase and definitely has the potential to get a lot better, especially if it takes its time to flesh out characters and capitalise on the elements of itself that make it unique.

I'm certainly gonna keep reading to see where it goes.

Snidely
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I'm having a good time with this story.

Reviewed at: Chapter 54: Ruins

The normal guy sucked into a MMO type world but very fun.  I'm up to chapter 16 and there hasn't been any smut or obligatory cross sexing.  Really good in that regard but the F bomb is used often and other off color comments.

Lots of splattered brains, and dead stuff.  The Hero is kinda OP he is supposed to be. 

Really enjoying the story.  It is supprisingly for RR, written well.

Thanks for the fun.

Allanther
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Don't let the title fool you

Reviewed at: Chapter 25: Blood

Have read to chapter 25.  This is a good story.  Worth reading. 

A few minor grammatical or spellings errors but they don't detract from the experience and will likely be edited away soon enough. 

 

 

Cave Carrot
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24 chapters released at time of review.


I personally didn't care much for the prologue's writing style, but I did like the rest of the novel.

Other than that, it is fast paced and action in every chapter. 

Vanya
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Review as of chapter 30:

The prologue was is a lot to get your head around what is happening and is not a good example of how the following chapters read.

The following chapters are easy to read, outrageous funny in places. Strong MC and someone relatable to. Supporting characters have not come into the story in a big way yet, however still early in the story.

No majors with grammar etc.

Strongly recommend reading this.

SmallPaw
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Excellent and fun!

Looking forward to more; darkly funny in a good way

 

Diamondninja
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I'm loving this story so far.

Taking some of my favorite tropes from other popular xanxia and LitRPG influences and making it original in a well written way. I just binged all of what's available to the current chapter as of 12/10/19 and an eagerly awaiting an update.

I'm very interested to see where this goes after tutorial and moving forward. 

The eyebrows are undeniably HooMonšŸ‘ŒšŸ‘āœŒļøšŸ––

Steady
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im still gonna read it lol

Reviewed at: Chapter 52: Nemesis

The sense of direction I get from this story is that the human species is probably fucked. And we get the story of a guy that has a head start and maybe it's snowballing out of control. Sometimes he's fighting for his life, sometimes he's just walking around. It doesn't quite feel purposeful- it just feels more of an exploration exercise (which kind of is at odds with the premise about the species being doomsdayed). A lot of the times he'll do stuff that is rather reckless. Then it's post-rationalized as energy inside him fucking with him. It's sort of consistent, and somewhat plausible. I mean, I wouldn't have really called it recklessness if the protagonist didn't call attention to it. Otherwise I would have just thought, boy this kid recognizes that his species is fucked, it's do nothing to only die a few weeks later, or risk dying now to have a chance later. It also feels like a somewhat poor excuse to get the main character into dire situations. Like, there's that F~S ranking thing going on, and by a week he's gone up by a sublevel. So at this point, is the story about how things are falling apart in front of him, and he just sort of can kinda scrape on by, or is it about being a paragon of humanity that's going beyond to pull everyone else up? It kind of seems like a middle ground where he saves stuff in front of him (which is consistent), and it's sort of bad because I don't really have a clear identity of the protagonist in my head if that's the case, we've only seen him fight a lot, and very few things outside of that. I mean, outside of that he roleplayed as an NPC which was pretty neat, but from it I'm getting the sense that he's a chill dude that goofs around a bit. He saved the dude he trolled, which is double neat. Which can be a good angle, but outside of this there aren't any moments that he goofs around so it's not a big thing, it looks like more of a one off thing. Uhh, what I'm getting at is the plot is a little too loosey goosey, a little too open ended. Anyway I'd be hyped for anything (ex human unsupremecy), and right now it's just curising along with some fights that have some tension.

UmamiMan
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This fic is hilarious! Great action!

Reviewed at: Chapter 31: Hartshire

Great fiction. Been bingeing it and its amazing! Very very funny right now, i cant gret enough of it. and the action is amazing too! grammar is great for RR only a few odd mistakes. Story is good right now, blend of randidly and defiance of the fall, but with better writing. Style  is fun and easy to read. will go back to binging the last few chapters now! only downside is that the MC acts weird at time, but bonus points for humor, so its not to bad!

Kodismaximus
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I've always loved slimes in fiction. They are so adorable and squishy!

When I first picked up this fiction I thought it would be a copy of that one anime, but it took a different turn almost immediately and I am enjoying the story quite profoundly! 

More more more please!