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Heroes have bad luck. Rusk wants to be one anyway.

When Rusk was a kid, he was rescued by an adventurer calling herself a Hero who told him about a place called Sanctuary. Ever since that day, Rusk has aspired to become a Hero himself, and the first step to take would be visiting Sanctuary in person. But Sanctuary is practically unreachable, located on an island outside the kingdom, and both societal and familial pressure stand in the way of Rusk’s aspirations. At nineteen, he’s getting impatient.

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Fay Voss

Fay Voss

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Rusk's Savior ago
Rusk Makes a Friend ago
Things Go Wrong ago
Dark Forest ago
Rusk's First Heroic Battle ago
Recovery ago
Gathering Materials ago
Elva Forge ago
Departure ago
Bad Luck Heroes ago
Tarfell's Fall ago
Corpse ago
Flies ago
Unwelcome Welcome ago
Greil's Secret ago
Politics ago
Felix ago
Mayor Rose and Servants ago
Loretta's Map ago
Mayor's Monster ago
Dungeon Monster Fight ago
Exit Mayor Rose ago
Off to Sanctuary ago
Seasick ago
Dead Portal ago
Elena's Peculiarity ago
Sea Serpent ago
Captain Arrolg's Mettle ago
Explanation of 'Mancers ago
Elena's Relation to Captain Arrolg ago
Sanctuary in Sight ago
Sanctuary Island ago
Floumeré Daemontra ago
Captain Arrolg's Escape ago
Killing Straggler Zombies ago
Exploring the Stronghold ago
Versus the Sea Serpent ago
Travel ago
Versus Necromancer First Time ago
Resistance Brigade ago
Dead Forest ago
Safe House Barren ago
Rusk Solo Chapter ago
Rusk Loses ago
Rusk and Crusader Captured ago
King's Threats ago
Disloyal Guard ago
Iraiah's Entrance ago
Dungeon Escape ago
Flee the Castle ago
Reunited with Mandy ago
Plans to Find the Hawk ago
Group Split ago
Gedresial's Truth ago
Change of Plans ago
Arrolg's Demise ago
Revelations in Dreams of Monsters ago
Necromancer's Defeat ago
Dead Portal's End ago
Sanctuary Splits the Group ago
Deals with Nature ago
Plans and Rebuilding ago
Interruption ago
King Monster Legends ago
Off to Face King Monster ago
Sanctuary's Generation ago

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Good quality writing and a neat twist on the typical Hero genre.