Lament of the Determined

by baguette

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One of the greatest and most critically acclaimed web novels ever made, Lament Of The Determined explores themes of freedom and perspective in an epic journey through a deeply thought out world with an incredibly interesting cast of characters. 

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HURGMCGURG
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What in the name of Dwane Johnson was that? Baguette is speaking the language of gods. Such high IQ writing hurts my brain the more I think about it. Be right back, I need to go wash out my eyes for a couple seconds.

Tranquilmoth
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Unironically kekW, this shit is pretty fucking hilarious. 

ClickPause
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Mr. Dog clicked the five star button and grinned as he felt the story's rating tighten.

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Stractus
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One of the best works on this site.  Would recommend to all seeking a professional approach to the litrpg genre.

Zeal Iskander
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Baguetio is like an 8-year old trapped in a 12-year old body.

This story has small dick energy.

I rate 5/5 because I have the IQ of a child.

 

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sweetchestnut
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The finest reading in all the land

Reviewed at: 0001

A fine reading that only true intellectuals will understand. I am in awe at the quality of this writing.

neilu
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Instant classic, of course.

Reviewed at: pee pee

To be fair its a 15 minutes read, and its pretty damn fun. On the other hand, its complete crap.

Good job !

Slabdrill
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Well, I was laughing the whole time. I guess that means this is pretty good.

A few parts seemed like super weird but it's hard to tell because I don't read much on this site.

That being said, would recommend after having read at least 2 other royalroad stories.