Valdarus Burning: Rise of Spirits

by NinaNeptune

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Female Lead High Fantasy Magic Male Lead Multiple Lead Characters

Kywen and Sundeera are nexum, soul bonded, and they have their hearts set upon finding the rumored second Scroll of Jakuta. The girls live on the southern tip of the enormous continent of Hindar in a society that has enjoyed centuries of peace due to the Treaty of Jaliff. The treaty was forged by the Elemental, Spirit, Flora, and Fauna clans after the destruction of the Black Vortex. Sundeera has just returned from a half-season of Inaru training while Kywen has suddenly made plans to bid the secretive and rumor shrouded Wiovan Order at the Collaboration, a festival celebrated every two seasons to encourage boys and girls aged thirteen to sixteen to bid for apprenticeships with previously warring clans. After a chance encounter with Jorrel Airmala, the second heir to Watcher of Clans, and a shocking attack that leaves more questions than answers, the trio is led into a whirlwind of adventure and danger, threatening not only their lives but everyone that lives on Hindar. 

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Compelling and richly detailed

Reviewed at: The Girl Has No Roots

Excited to see where this story goes. The characters are interesting and distinct and the present tense brings you into what feels like immediate action. I enjoy being able to visualize settings and details.