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I am the alpha and the omega~

Through my endless pursuit-

I gaze upon reality with a gentle gaze~

I became supreme-

With a wave of my hand, life appears~

All of creation-

Like newborn babies, they seek warmth, food and comfort~

Can now be molded to my desires-

I close my palm and the budding lifeforms are crushed into oblivion~

And I will do so, toying with it as I please-

I am a benevolent god..

Ariel, a strange young woman was driven to the brink of madness from being unable to fulfill her heart's desire until one fateful day.

Watch as she creates, destroys and plays in a world where she is the one above all.

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David Deisher
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I found the book(?) To be decent there were a few grammer errors here and there though the main problem I had with it was were it would start off with the god on the first chapter then switch between geim and rick from the second to the fourth chapter without explaining to much of what the god was doing in those thousands of years

abdirahman
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The biggest issue I have with this novel is that it has no clear goals, no arcs, no development, or no big questions.

This more of a diary of a woman who becomes god, and even there we do not get much explain what god is or their powers, and what the hell they even do.

Other than that this story is well written with good grammar.

If you enjoy a slice of life novel then I guess this is for you, but there was so much that could be done with the idea of a mortal becoming good. However this novel fall short on that. 

fakeyfail
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Light Hearted Read but beware

Reviewed at: Chapter 15: GOD HAND

It's quite enjoyable to read, it's very light and fluffy, basically a solid wish-fulfillment story. 

The biggest hurdle was that -I might be reading into it to be fair- the author of this fiction seems to be projecting some serious issues against men, virtually all the characters are women, and the men are either incompitent patsies, the butt of the joke, or comically "evil". It's pretty easy to brush aside, but it's definitely a noticable detraction.

Muzaka
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Oh Great and Mighty Goddess! I want more!

Reviewed at: Chapter 12: Fallen

An excellent story about an almighty Goddess! This story is well written and takes into account a lot of issues about a truly omnipotent being. It is also different from a lot of stories of the same style, as the quality is above most of them and it's not some wish-fulfillment, or at least not completely, as the characters are depicted in a believable way with their own will and desires. In the end, it is all about the immensity of God.