Transit Core

Transit Core

by spaizzzer

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[This fic has a loooooooooooooooot of math]

This is a story about Tod, a dungeon core who's tired of the dungeon life, and decided to do something more slice-of-lifey. So, the gods allowed him to take a vacation and create a subway network as a 'dungeon'. He also gets a human body to experience life as a commuter, where he can eavesdrop on commuters, spy on their daily lives, eventually, also gets an ability to see a status summary of his commuter's lives, how much money they make, where they live, what they do and all that. 

All, so that Tod can build a rail and transit network as a dungeon core that is bigger than everything the world has ever known.

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watchman
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Well, everyone’s gotta start somewhere

Reviewed at: Line 1

Chapters are very short so far, first two chapters are just the MC staring at menus. Will wait for a lot more chapters before updating my review since only 3 are out at the time of review.