Lord of Undeath

by Libraest

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Magic Non-Human lead Villainous Lead
Warning This fiction contains:
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In an otherwise normal fantasy world filled with magic, mystical beasts, miracles, gods and so on, people live in relative happiness. The power of magic rules this world making anything within the realm of imagination possible. Within such a world a nameless undead is born. While such evil beings are not unheard of, this specific pile of bones will rock the very foundation of human civilization on a quest of total annihilation.

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English is not my native tongue, so I hope that all of you, who will decide to follow me on this epic (hopefully) adventure of life and death, will be forgiving and supportive of my mistakes. I'll try to upload at least once a week, but considering this is my first story it might not happen. We'll just have to live and see.

p.s any advice/recommendations/ideas are welcome!

p.s.s I do not own the cover.

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Hyeon
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Till now it has everything you would expect and this in a way that makes it interesting and to some extend also funny to read. The normal problems a novel of the genre has (not enough interaction , or transformation into a human to get interaction which kinda kills the whole point) got solved in simple yet effective way. The mc and followers are fun and interesting to read about and you wil ask yourself after every chapter " what weird does he plan next". Hope to see more in the future!

The Dolphin
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It's very rare to see an undead MC with undead goals, but this story is exactly that! The MC creates logical decisions with the information he has. All things we (Humans) wouldn't even consider, the MC wouldn't even know about, creating this unique dynamic of learning things and actually using that information for his own gains. I feel I should also say the MC also possesses the power of a lich, being able to raise the dead. Also, as far as I've seen, there's no goody two shoe moment, the mc is practical and efficient. The reactions and writing are also captivating and keep me wanting more. The only downside are the cliffs at the end, almost make me want to walk off one. I 100% recommend at least trying this story, even if it isn't your usual cup of tea :)

LucianoWrites
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Royal Road has an abundance of stories that claim to be dark stories but not that many actual, dark stories. This is a phenomenal dark story that I cannot recommend enough if you happen to like stories that center around undead characters. If you give it a shot, I promise you won't regret it. 

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Synopsys: A new kind of undead is born and Go his merry way to look for the reasen of undead life and to meet new People.

Sarcasmus of.

He knew what he is and he know what the world want him to so.

The writer in my opinion, does a great story telling. You have different point of Views in some chapters. Normaly they don't go well in the same, not here they went in eatch other quiet naturel. No cuts i mean.

Grammar is good.