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After a horrific traffic accident killing multiple people Cassidy finds himself in a room with beings speaking in an unintelligible language before being reborn into a different world. Confused and clueless, he just shrugs and lives his new life in this new world with magic and monsters.

Hi everyone, it's my first go at writing so it's fine to be brutal with your reviews. I'm doing this to grow and to give back to the community that has kept me entertained for years. Hope you have fun reading! and if you dont i hope you tell me why at least and not just leave a non helpful comment. Cheers!

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Very nice ! And it got blue box !!

Reviewed at: Chapter 11: Class

Disclaimer : I’m not a native english speaker so i can not judge the grammar. (Review at chapter 14).

 

It’s a very promising story ! There is a nice flow and conversation are fun (even if something a bit unrealistic ).

The universe is interesting and is nicely develop by the author.

The mc could be a bit more developed but it is still fun to read.

In conclusion i can not wait to read more chapter ! 

Ps: I think the pace or the story is great.