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Reaper Hex
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So I'm not trying to be rude but here is my honest feedback. I like the concept of the abilities you have for the story but the main character just seems like an jerk I don't like instead of being funny if that is what you are trying to go for. 

mrnuclear
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Now this review is base mostly on Prologue, Chap. 1 and nothing else except my vast reading experience on this site. I would suggest you read it to make your on choice on the story instead of using the reviews to inform you.

TL;DR at the bottom.

As someone who loves LITRPG's, Isekai, Reincarnations, Wuxia, Anime, Fantasy, Adventure etc... I can tell already from the little bit I have read from this story that, this story is not for me or for many with similar tastes.

LITRPG's is a genre that is in constant demand but also saturated with poor attempts. This is a poor attempt for me just from the little I have read. It ''could'' get better later on but it already lost me from the beginning. 

WHY?

It reads like an anime and thats a bad thing. In fact for me and perhaps me alone thats a terrible thing to find out. You see anime IMO is generic and follows a terrible pattern that is rarely broken  and depending on the genre of anime somethings happens more often than others. Only the great animes, the kind that are the best of that year break the mould in someway that makes those generic moment add to it instead of take from it. (the ''it'' being the anime)

So what are those terrible moments?

The random and inhuman ecchi moments, the generic and shallow interactions so far from a real human moment that its so alien that it cant be comedic. In anime those moments can be funny if done right and more importantly if those moments are rare not only in the anime your watching but in all anime as well. But they are not, they are done so often that every anime regardless of genre  have them because for Japanese writers and viewers that apparently can never stop being not funny.

Why am I writing about those Ecchi moments?

Cause thats exactly what happend in Chap. 1, MC meets female GOD and to confirm reality he needs to cop a feel of those big anime tiddies.(Wish fulfillment aside) Its suppose to be funny I guess, but coming from a MC I already think is an ass for killing his guildmates and ''friends'' and stealing the boss loot while that somehow is possible / allowed in a game. (mind boogling) It also cements in my mind the MC is a prick and not the kind you wanna read about and follow on his journey.

There is more I can write about to complain and bitch about, like having a presumably anime watcher and westerner writing a story like an anime.(Without the Japanesse Culture) Missing the mark of why people like reading stories about characters in game like worlds or having game like systems of progress. Or about why I think introducing World Ending quest or GOD's at the start of a story is bad for a story or novice writer etc.

In short its a pass from me, because the first chapter was bad start by my standards. Its too much like an anime, the mc is unlikable and the are better gems out there waiting to be found.

Moreta
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Unlike author claims, his MC is nothing like average nerd, and more like the most asshole person can physically be. Premise of needing to earn money to level up is also fake, asbany monster killed just dissapistes into "gold" instantly absorbed into his level bar, so functionally just xp, only with variation that he can't hold money.

I don't like being lied to, and I hate rapists who think it's fine, since she couldn't say no...

KitarakDarcon
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I was very interested in this story when I first read about it. A protagonist that had to forgo something often seen as important to gain strength is a great concept. I was even willing to deal with the lecherous main character so long as they started to show improvement or hidden reasoning behind their actions  Sadly I only got to chapter 9 before i just had to stop. The above average story so far was not out weighing the pure dislike I was developing for the transparent seeming simple minded character. Any character depth was lost for cheap jokes. 

RazerFin
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this is a standard isekei with a cheat abilty/item MC. This is one of those ones that I really wanted to like. The grammar bogs down this story the whole way through. The world is not paper thin at this point but it could definitely use some fleshing out. Characters are fairly one deminsional with the exception of the MC to some extent. This is my opinion here so take it with a grain of salt but the MC is one of the most unlikable in fiction I have read on this site. He is full of contradictions, there could be plot reasons for this but they have not been hinted at enough to garner sympathy from the reader. He is a pure cheat MC wiping the floor with any and all monsters and people with no effort thanks to his divine weapon. Only in the last arc did he have any trouble at all with a enemy. He racks up so many abilities that are not explained or used. His interactions with female characters are pretty disgusting even for the isekei genre. The main motivation for the Mc is to somehow find a way to pay for prostitutes, it’s a running gag but 79 chapters in you would expect some some of character growth or at least a small bit of information on why this person is the way he is.

2_L33T_2_LIFT
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when I read the title I was hoping it would be a more mercantile style story instead it's just your typical stupid MC isekai the whole him not being able to use gold thing is just annoying and pointless since he gets gold for killing monsters anyway and just trades whenever he needs to buy anything

GreenKing
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 I hate leaving negative reviews. I never want to discourage a writer especially someone trying. The story is a solid 3..though the main character is quite unlikable in many ways...but the character stays true to his design and I can respect that. However this story is being murdered by poor grammar. And that is what really killed it. If you dont care about grammar then give this a shot....but if you do...run.

Bence491
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If you can accept that the MC is definitly not a normal person, then this is OK story.

The MC gains some depth over time, grammar is better than most here on RR.

I consider this a nice, light read, all together an average story. As I was reading it, I just could not put it down, and made me want to see where will the story go.

floug472
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So im not too much into womanizing MCs, harems and all that shit ,

this is fairly funny and intersting however.

As long as it doesn't get overly cringy i'll keep reading this, since it's really entertaining .

boy123istacken
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if he gets max level does he gain the amazing ability to hold gold and use it

good novel too