Original ONGOING Action Fantasy Anti-Hero Lead High Fantasy Low Fantasy Magic Male Lead Martial Arts
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Isaac lived in the pit for as far as he remembers. Fighting more and more opponents for points to buy mutations, getting stronger with each one. The pits are an illegal underground fighting arena where people make bets on who kills who. And I'm a fighter. 

 

 

 

This is my first time writing, so I would love some feedback to try to improve my work.

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 Looking foward to reading more! It reminds me of a mix of HBO's spartacus series, the new sci-fi movie Alita, and the Maze Runner. Well done with the storyline!