The Supreme God's War

by Ace Valentine

Original HIATUS Adventure Fantasy Satire Tragedy Dungeon Grimdark High Fantasy Magic Male Lead Multiple Lead Characters Mythos Non-Human lead Portal Fantasy / Isekai Reader interactive Reincarnation Ruling Class Secret Identity Strategy Strong Lead Supernatural Villainous Lead War and Military
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In a world where countries rise and fall like the sun, there exists a castle.

A golden castle, atop an island of cloud, untouched by the foolish creatures of the earth.

The Gods avoid it. The races whisper about it in legends, and theorize about it in their history books.

None but a select few, know the true despair and carnage locked inside that treasure chest guarding the horizon. 

Now, everyone will know true terror.

Because the God of Death has finally awoken, and He is coming to grind the world beneath his feet!

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NeoMare
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Your idea is good, however, your storytelling can improve. I guess the only thing you need is practice and perhaps proofread your chapters a second time.

By the way, your chapters could be longer but I guess that is more personal preference.