The Thundering Tortoise Trio

by Mullayo

Original ONGOING Adventure Comedy Fantasy Satire Anti-Hero Lead Magic Martial Arts Multiple Lead Characters School Life Slice of Life Strategy Strong Lead Wuxia Xianxia

Three young friends try to make their way through the dog-eat-dog cultivation world of the jianghu.

They have chosen to take the path least travelled, by rising together as The Thundering Tortoise Trio!

Along the way, Jian Cheng, Fatty Li Feng and Fairy Fen Ling will forsake their own petty selfishness, their hateful sect, conventional wisdom and even the entire righteous path, for the family they have become... And  for benefits of course!

After all everyone loves benefits!

 

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SevenShade
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Cyrrently at chspter 4... it has potential and i hope that it wont degrade ...though the setting is your typical wuxia/xiaxa genre i can still see a lot of good points here... i wouldnt elaborate since its only have 4 chapter ... i would still recommend this to reae... add to your READING LIST  .. I demand more chapter... please and thank you

hakatri gin
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Starts generic, then gains a lot of personality - Chapter 12

The first two chapters are rather ok-ish but after the third one the story finds its own style and develops charmingly, the mixture of humor and xianxia is a more western approach to stand up unlike the traditional chinesse comedy of breaking the formality of a situation and this mixture feels very fresh

As with all stories the development of ideas is more important than the originality, this is a very standard story so far but the way its handled it sets it apart, and i like turtles so i may be biased, but who doesnt like turtles? 

Start at chapter 3 and see for yourself