Dungeon Without A Name

by Tarry

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Comedy Fantasy Romance Short Story Tragedy Supernatural
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Sexual Content
Hello, world! I'm a person just like you. I talk to myself, watch anime, read manga, read multitudes of web and light novels, play visual novels, dabble in programming and playing a wide variety of games of varying genres. And this is my story.

Why? Because right now… I'm a Dungeon in an alternate world. Like, an actual dungeon! Not someone in it.

All those stories about being summoned as a hero or bystander, or even being turned into various kinds of monsters after being summoned. For a lot of stupid reasons, I became a Dungeon. With people attempting to steal my family jewels. Or treasures, whichever you prefer to call them.

I guess I should stop talking to myself and get back to this boring task assigned to me…

EARLY STAGES: Tags are subject to change as story advances.
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Marcolzan
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This looks like it will turn into an interesting story. Keep it up, I have high hopes for you

00petar00
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Seems interesting, can’t wait to see what kind of romance will be there since he’s a dungeon, big time skips at the time,im guessing that there won’t be as much later on, just skipping so many years, and humans can’t even reach that high of a floor anyway. It is interesting though, author has potential as you can see from this story.

If this is your first time writing i am damn impressed.

 

Will do a nicer review after there’s 10+ chapters. Its really good for now.

Ddragon
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a nice flow and a Dungeon FF :D

i really like this so far. The Flow, how it read it to me, is really nice and a interessting Setup. I hope the ??? Trait isnt a "Dungeonavatar" ;P would like some darker Skill aka animate Dead (Heroes)...

But still, the Story about a Mind without a living body and real Emotions need some unique Way to bind your Readers on your MC and his Way in this FF.

look forward your next Chapters!

iRick
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It seems far more complex than other FF dungeon we have here in RoyalRoad, looking forward to it!

Expecting good fights in the future!

Anxiously awaiting the next chapters.

riotguards
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Reincarnation with a twist

A great start to a series which I feel is so good that I'm actually writing out a review, love the concept and the style of writing, can’t wait for more chapters

 

while it is relatively new i feel the current development of the story is well worth 5 stars in all categories (mostly my bias between non-human fiction and overpowered beings which has lead me to highly favour this story but i have enjoyed it immensely though the writers efforts)

duhbigotaku
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A unique flavor on Dungeons, with a solid base, and good lore. This could easily become one of my top stories.

ckxsl023
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Oooooohhh.... Another Dungeon FF, Nice :)

Looks more complex than Lair and Mystery of the Dungeon, Still Rooting For it, looking forward to seeing a much more realistic outlook in your novel.

DarelSprings167
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very good top 5 for the genre.

thoroughly enjoyed this 

I a, really looking forward to thenext instalment

roceil
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This thing dead?

Seems like it's been a long time since it was last updated.

Hope it comes back.

Greywolf
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They style and story could get a higher review  if the author had or will post more chapters.
Character seems okay, but will get a higher/lower score from me, depending on how the MC grows from where he is, and how, and how he writes the other dungeons from the DMC, from this point. Adventures from this point, and how they think and  interact with the MC is also a attractor/detractor, depending on how they are written