by Gennon Asche
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A puzzling encounter leaves Dimitry a beggar with a strange emblem on his wrist. Around him, the people suffer as ruthless organizations, opportunistic nobles, and an overly pious church vie for power in a land under constant siege by some unknown threat. He quickly learns the difficulty of life in this new world.
Can a displaced surgeon become the leader a struggling people need him to be?
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A good start and an interesting main character. As of now chapter 14 we get cool scenes when Dimitry experiences difficulties and obstacles he needs to overcome. We also have cool side characters and aa plot that envelops the context in an intriguing way. I can't wait to read more.
Style: I like the prose and the style the author uses. Dialogues are cool, and the scenes seems not rushed. The only things I don't like are the indentations when reading on the phone though.
Grammar: Didn't find any important error and wasn't looking for them.
Characters: Well, we get cool characters and varying psychological growth on them. We get a fairy also that's precious to the mc. All in all, they feel more than 2D, which is good.
Story: The plot seems to await more, since the chapters are still in an introduction of sorts while Dimitri learns more about the world and the jobs, etc.
Conclusion: Read it. If you are bad with blood, beware of some sensitive stuff though, since the mc is akin to a surgeon it is possible to find pieces of mutilation, body parts, organs, etc in the story.
One of the reasons why i don't like reincarnation genre is that, most of the time, authors fail to write believable Mcs, from the thought process to the way they interact with the world.
So far this novel has been really good, world building has been great, characters are well fleshed out and more importantly:
The Mc has been acting his age
One of the things i find annoying in most reincarnation novels, is that Mcs (adult ones) tend to behave like teenagers, meaning, total idiots.
Here we have an Mc who's cautious and mature.
Some higher existences put him in the world he is in, for some sort of game. He unfortunately doesn't know the rules nor what is expected of him (nor do we).
My fear is that romance is going to ruin this novel (everything's been great to this point), maybe I'm just being paranoid.
And i almost forgot, Author please don't turn that faerie into some kind of girlfriend for the Mc, I hate when Mcs fall in love with their nonhuman/ non-corporal she-friends and then their goal becomes to make a human body for them, please don't do it.
WMW was the first of this genre i ever had to read and i loved it, ever since then i have been looking for more, for better, and this novel is giving what i have been looking for.
So I highly recommend it.
And sorry if what I wrote doesn't make any sense, for English not my native language.
Review as of chapter 40
Style: Mr. Asche wields imagery with skill; it’s very easy to picture the scenes he portrays in this story. Furthermore, the settings are vivid and captivating. The worldly conditions are pretty grim and the writer goes to great lengths to avoid trivializing that fact. I’d peg this as professional-level writing; something rare for Royal Road.
Story: It’s good! The worldbuilding is second-to-none and the events of the story are memorable.
It’s a little too soon to judge the magic system entirely, but for now I can say that I’m quite satisfied with it. It depends on a strategic resource named ‘vol’ which is a consumable ‘metal’ used to power spells and stuff. This is a unique take on magic and should offer some enticing possibilities for the future of the story while also serving as a soft balancer.
Speaking of, the consumable nature and limited supply of vol means that the wealthy have a substantial leg up as far as magic is concerned. Some stories execute this poorly but Castle Kingside handles it well. It ties in fluidly with the somewhat grim setting.
Grammar: No complaints here; my typo radar has come back with negative results so far. This is a very readable story and highly polished to boot.
Characters: The primary characters are well developed and side characters are also interesting in their own right. (They have their own motives and aren’t any less intelligent than the main cast.)
One of the primary characters (the tiny one) is quite annoying, however, it’s clear that this is an intentional trait. While I can’t say I prefer this, it doesn’t hurt my rating of this story in the slightest because it’s purely a matter of personal preference. I wish to stay objective.
Another, whose relationship to main character I won’t reveal, has a very fascinating backstory which we’ve only begun to scratch the surface of in the story so far. I find humor in the idea that their healthy appreciation of mining processes would allow them to enjoy a Fun game of Dwarf Fortress. (Not that they are a dwarf, mind you.)
Finally, the main character, Dimitry. He’s a former surgeon from Earth who has found himself on a new world, in classic isekai fashion. What sets him apart from protagonists in similar stories is the supreme relevance of his past life on Earth. It’s realistic that his expertise and personality will carry over to have a massive impact on his character. I appreciate Mr. Asche’s mindfulness and attention to detail in this area of the story.
To be clear; his past life does not get in the way of the story at all, but it does have a significant influence on his actions, which is excellent.
That’s all for my review!
I’ve really loved this story and can’t wait for it to continue. I highly recommend you give it a try.
Review as of chapter 31
This story is a pretty traditionnal isekai story. A dude get transported to another world with magic. He even gets a power during the transition. However, it's a lot more grounded and realistic than most of its counterparts. For example, he starts homeless and left wondering how he'll be able to feed himself.
Now was it any good? Personnally I enjoyed my time reading it. The writing is definitely on point and have nothing bad to say about it. As for the story, the start was actually the best part imo. After he gets to the brothel, more flaws starts appearing. I'll now discuss those flaws in more details. I might seem nitpicky but pointing flaws is just easier. Keep in mind I enjoyed the story at large. Beware of SPOILERS.
First thing I want to mention is a flaw I noticed in multiple isekai stories already but it has to be said. It's the tendency to forget their previous life. Authors are excited by the magic world and tend to not pay much attention to it. It's actually a bigger problem in this case since the story is a bit darker. What comes to your mind first when you are lonely and in despair? For most people, it will be friends and family. However, they are not even mentionned a single time.
Now let's talk about the 2 other characters from the main cast starting with Precious. The way she is introduced is just so forced. Let's have a demonic creature that reads people emotions in the story. Sounds cool why not but can it be bit more thought out than having said creature going directly to mc without any reason. People might claim that it was because she was attracted to his despair but a whole lot of people have shitty life there. Btw most people would just kill her but she just goes and knocks on his windows. She hides all the time but here no problem. Don't get me wrong btw. I like this character but forcing things like that really takes you out of the story since it doesn't flow naturally anymore.
Next let's continue with Saphiria, the obvious romantic interest. Precious was forced but this is on another level. They are quite a few problems here imo. First problem is why does the mc wants to escape? He asked for a job. Delphine then hired him, fed him and gave him shelter. I don't remember her threatening him at any point. He is not the first butcher because people probably quit. So why does he want to escape? He is not a slave. Saphiria is. That means suddenly an espace must happen. I can't reasonnably think of any other reason. If he wanted to go elsewhere, just pay a merchant convoy to travel with them.
Second big problem, the escape itself. So mc wants to escape for whatever reason and he wants Saphiria to help him survive in the wild. First task reveal everything to the person with a magic slave collar... Come on, really? Whatever, he better gtfo out now because Delphine won't appreciate someone trying to steal her property. Does he just go on his way hoping for the best? Nope instead he outs himself as the disappearing man, assault a bishop and all around risk his life to free Saphiria who he has known for 2 days... Honestly this was rather disappointing. He felt closer to the 2 homeless guys at the start but it's not like he risked his life to save them. However, Saphiria is the romantic interest so we brute force through any common sense. He doesn't know her, has no relationship with her. In fact she is not even really herself due to the collar.
That's the reason why I prefered the start. It flowed naturally. It made sense. It seems to me the author already had the main cast in his head. He knows them and already has plans and ideas for them. Problem is I don't and mc neither. He brute forced them in the story and in Saphiria case he did it to a ridiculous degree. Good thing is since now they are present I guess it shouldn't be necessary anymore. It would be a worrying trend if this would continue.
So the book finally reached a point (pages-wise) where I thought I should start reading it... and boy was I hooked. This is a great book and I have no idea why it "only" has 1.8k followers. It should be up there with the best, in my opinion. Great writing, an interesting world, loads of science, and characters that each have their own personality.
Why is this not one of the most popular books (even if among the top-rated)? I have a couple of suspicions:
1. The start is slow... and a bit depressing. A "real" medieval world, with poverty, hunger, and abysmal hygiene, and the author throws us right into that depressing surrounding. There is no glorious arrival to the world, no fantastic skills that get the MC our of the pickle... just a man struggling. I'll be honest... I started the book a couple of months ago, but then temporarily dropped it. It just didn't quite... capture me. So if anything the start is the weak point of the story, but do yourself a favor and keep on reading.
2. The magic, especially the MC's, is lackluster. I mean, a cool spell in a normal world... but not exactly up to snuff in a fantasy world, considering the costs and the MCs inability/unwillingness to become an assassin type. If I was nitpicking, I would also say that I find it weird that people are so hyped up about it. I don't find it better or worse than some of the other spells out there, that are considered "normal." Magic picks up in the later chapters, as the MC explores more uses for the spells he has. Interestingly, the most useful one turns out to be an ordinary spell that he ends up modifying, not the ones he got granted... go figure.
3. As mentioned above.. the MC is pretty much a scholar/medic. And not the Azararinth Healer type of healer either. He just doesn't... fight. Or rarely does. I suspect that most people reading books on here, do like their fighting scenes. This book doesn't offer much of that (so far).
But, again, the book is one of the best on RR and you should definitely read it, unless you are a battle junky.
This is the kind of story I wish was written more often. It has a very mature voice and balances all the aspects of storytelling in a superb manner.
All the characters have their unique charm and mysterious backstories. The pacing is awesome and we never get bogged down by excessive introspection or exposition. The writing has a nice flow that doesn't break my immersion.
All in all, a very nice read. I recommend it.
A very well written story with compelling elements. An innovative protagonist that carves out his place in a hostile environment, a detailed and deep world, a thought out magic system and an interesting underlying theme.
me personally, l love this story it doesn't rely on crazy power system, levels or any of that stuff but more so on the actual story telling. There is magic in this novel but it's not overpowered.If you've ever read the wandering inn you might like this. And if you're discouraged by the cover or title don't be because the characters are quite good and the mc to some may look dumb for his decisions but to me it makes sense as someone with his occupation needs those traits which results him in committing to the actions he does. Anyways a potential great story in the making better than a lot of the other stories on trending list in my opinion.
If you like magic systems, realistic science, and combinations of the two, you should like this!
Great story so far (ch 31). It took a few chapters to really hook me but then I couldn't put it down.