Techno-Heretic

by skalnor

Original ONGOING Adventure Fantasy Sci-fi High Fantasy Male Lead Portal Fantasy / Isekai Ruling Class Strong Lead
Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Traumatising content

Eli is a man sentenced to death for the crime of surpassing the sacred number of 32.8, which is exactly the percentage of machine augmentations that people are allowed to make to their bodies. However it seems that death is not his end as his soul is dragged away into a fantasy world. As fate(?) seems to have ulterior plans for him he sets out to experience and change this world,as he will also be changed by it.

But this isn't a story about technology, magic, or bullshit exploits. It is a tale of failure. The failure of communication. The failure of systems, both magical and man made.The failure of logic and math in the chaotic mess that is life.

Authors warning: This novel is released strictly on a 'it's done when its done' basis. If it takes me a week to get the maid complaining to a farm hand or a teacher chewing out a student just right, then it will take a week.

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radomguy
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  1. Grammar is mostly good ,but I found the writing style confusing.
Tomolone
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The story is decent. Feels a bit rushed/confusing at times with seemingly random perspective/character switches. Overal a decent fiction with a good general idea of where it wants to go.

Vahe
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I good start to a promising story. The world building is methodical and easy to understand, The main character is easy to project upon, and the pacing is just right.

The exploration of how magic can affect the advancement of a civilization and the priorities of it's citizens is very interesting as well.

Keep it up!

1HP_and_a_dream
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I haven't read muxh yet but it seems the grammer is good enough to get the point across, with little to few spelling mistakes. 7/10

If you the need to know more after reading the summary then go ahead and start, you won't be disappointed.

carlwash 1
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 I like the direction this story is headed. It's fairly interesting and worth checking out. The first 3 chapters pretty much lays out what to expect from the style.