Path To Adventure

by Rxlr

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Fantasy High Fantasy LitRPG Magic Male Lead

Follow Jace as he finally gets to travel a vast magical world.

Expect Jace to find glory in the struggle, love in the pain, peace in the battlefield and hope in the nightmares.

Magic roams free on every corner, just as allies and enemies do. Decisions will have to be made and sometimes only the hardest of choices will allow Jace to stay on his decided path. The Path To Adventure. 

 

Note: I'm an amateur author and English is not my native tongue, with that in mind please correct me whenever it seems necessary, punctuation included. If anyone gets interested in proofreading my writings that would be appreciated too.

I do not own the cover.

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jimmy bob
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There are some grammatical issues, but other then that the story has a good start. The world the author creates is nothing special, however has decent character building. You can tell the author first language isn't English, but over time this should improve reducing the mistakes.

Keep up the good work, and I'll keep reading.

AtlanticLurker
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Grammar is good enough to read through smoothly, the general flow and atmosphere of the story is pretty good. The story is straight to the point about what it wants to be and done decently, just that the pacing of story seems a bit slow which makes reading one chapter at a time less satisfying. Overall a good start so far.