Delusions & Illusions

by clovis

Original HIATUS Contemporary Short Story Male Lead

A young self-proclaimed doctor found a cure to a rare disease which only exist in his mind...

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Intriguing Premise Needs Polish

Reviewed at: I'll be back for dinner.

Could definitely use a proofreader. Still better written than most fic out there.

I love the concept behind the story, but the descriptions are a little extra, verging on overwrought.

Absolutely worth reading.