The Final Monster

by ExorcistJoker

Original ONGOING Action Fantasy Horror Sci-fi Anti-Hero Lead Female Lead Grimdark High Fantasy Magic Mythos Portal Fantasy / Isekai Ruling Class Supernatural Villainous Lead
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Sexual Content
  • Traumatising content

The Dahlia Kingdom has had a habit of summoning champions and heroes to fight in wars that could not be won with natives alone; this caused an era of prosperity for the human kingdom. However, for the first time in a long time, the Dahlia Kingdom has finally summoned another champion to fight against the Draconians and Majin, but what if this particular champion was no hero?

[Contains: Girls Love]

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Blobofjello
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I came in with high hopes for this fiction because it seemed like a story that would be right up my alley and because the first review was gushing about how great this story is. It ended up being okay at best though. I wouldn't really consider it "professional writer" material or among the best as a lot of the content felt one dimensional or cliché. 

It's not terrible though, so give it a try if you want.

KoboldPatrol
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E - D - G - Y and over-the-top wish fulfillment

The MC is from an orphanage but is a perfectly trained assassin with an AI in her (now partially broken) special equipment, everything she does succeeds, from fights to sneaking through the king's castle. The important side characters are one-dimensional stereotypes that are monologueing or literally roll on the floor laughing (WTF!?). Even the plot points are exaggerated. The only word that fits this story in my opinion is: edgy.

Grammar and descriptions have deficits but I've read worse.

I guess that many readers will greatly like this story but I'm out. (I read all posted chapters, i.e. up to the eighth)

Jinx Beast
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 I've gotta say this book is really good, it's the same quality I'd expect from a professional writer. The story so far is also great, I think this book has the potential to up there with the best.