Elemental Knights

by CapTillon

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Romance High Fantasy Magic Male Lead Multiple Lead Characters Portal Fantasy / Isekai Strong Lead

Have you ever found a book that you loved so much that you wished you could go to that world and meet all those characters that mean so much to you and see all those places you could only visit in your dreams? 

Well fortunately or unfortunately, Casey Bennett got that chance when he fell into the world of "The Queen's Riders". His entrance into his beloved book may not have been done willingly nor was it very smooth, but he is there nonetheless. His only clue to getting home lies at the end of the story. However, there's a catch, the story he knows so well and the story unfolding in front of him are slightly different. Given a power that had been hidden away for 500 years, Casey must find a way to limit these differences in order to bring about the ending written in his book. A task made even more difficult by the fact that his own presence is already bringing about changes. 

With the help of the main protagonists, he must navigate through this world that is both familiar and completely alien if he has any hope of going home.

 

 

 

A/N- This is my first novel so any and all feedback is greatly appreciated.

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This novel totally remainders me of the magicians, a man who travels to another world he read about. I also see tropes of Narnia in this novel. Which I love!

The grammar is okay, a few hits and misses here and there but the author does a lot of editing which means that a lot of hard work is put in.

The style is okay, meaning this story is well written but there wasn't anything gripping like some Mozart.

Now the MC is bland but this is a new story so not that much development going on but I hope to see more finesse from the MC later on since he read about this world.