Opening an orphanage in another world

by Azumiazmee94

I got reincarnated and one thing lead to another, I decided to open up and protect the orphanage

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 1: Reincarnated into the world of Achalasia ago
Chapter 2: World of Achalasia ago
Chapter 3: Meeting that will change my life in this world ago
Chapter 4: Soloing a Behemoth ago
Chapter 5: Meeting with the noble and royal ago
Chapter 6: The ten orphan ago
Chapter 7: Shopping part 1 ago
Chapter 8: Shopping part 2 ago
Chapter 9: Test ago
Chapter 10: Merchant guild master, Gizzere ago
Chapter 11: Grandpa Claude ago
Chapter 12: Housey ago
Chapter 13: Training part 1 ago
Chapter 14: Training part 2 ago
Chapter 15: Training part 3 ago
Chapter 16: The meeting ago
Chapter 17: Lesson learned ago
Chapter 18: Finding the cause ago
Chapter 19: Ash vs King Behemoth ago
Chapter 20: Imitating ago
Chapter 21: Achalasia Externa ago
Chapter 22: Condition to become an adventure ago
Chapter 23: Rumia, Vincent&Maria ago
Chapter 24: The new training hall ago
Chapter 25: Opening of the training hall ago
Chapter 26: Helping Alice part 1 ago
Chapter 27: Helping Alice part 2 ago
Chapter 28: Helping Alice part 3 ago
Chapter 29: Helping Alice part 4 ago
Chapter 30: Meeting the noble and royal once again ago
Chapter 31: Abyss ago
Chapter 32: Testing the bus golem ago
Chapter 33: Making new friends part 1 ago
Chapter 34: Making new friends part 2 ago
Chapter 35: Making new friends part 3 ago
Chapter 36: Visiting the sick ago
Chapter 37: Maris's soul ago
Chapter 38: Meeting the goddess once again ago
Chapter 39: Helping Qis part 1 ago
Chapter 40: Helping Qis part 2 ago
Chapter 41: Rafiah ago
Chapter 42: Teaching the young healers ago
Chapter 43: Outing with others part 1 ago
Chapter 44: Outing with others part 2 ago
Chapter 45: Outing with others part 3 ago
Chapter 46: Plan of action ago
Chapter 47: The orphans and Rafiah ago
Chapter 48: Worker get ago
Chapter 49: Start of Investigation part 1 ago
Chapter 50: Start of Investigation part 2 ago
Chapter 51: Start of Investigation part 3 ago
Chapter 52: Treating others part 1 ago
Chapter 52: Treating others part 2 ago
Chapter 54: Treating others part 3 ago
Chapter 55: Evening after the 1st day of investigation and treatment ago
Chapter 56: The second day ago
Chapter 57: Getting the water crystal part 1 ago
Chapter 58: Getting the water crystal part 2 ago
Chapter 59: Getting the water crystal part 3 ago
Chapter 60: Getting the water crystal part 4 ago
Chapter 61: Getting the water crystal part 5 ago
Chapter 62: Getting the water crystal part 6 ago
Chapter 63: Out ago
Chapter 64: After the attack ago
Chapter 65: Grim reaper ago
Chapter 66: Thanatos ago
Chapter 67: Community center ago
Chapter 68: Selfish? ago
Chapter 69: Magic class part 1 ago
Chapter 70: Magic class part 1 ago
Chapter 71: Nothing ago
Charlotte 72: And still nothing happen ago
Charlotte 73: Princess Nurhaliza ago
Charlotte 74: Proposition ago
Chapter 75: Official visit to orphanage part 1 ago
Chapter 76: Official visit to orphanage part 2 ago
Chapter 77: Before going to Malsia ago
Chapter 78: Departing to Malsia ago
Chapter 79: Malsia ago
Chapter 80: Orphan of Malsia ago
Chapter 81: Unexpected information ago
Chapter 82: At Estel part 1 ago
Chapter 83: Scythe boss ago
Chapter 84: At Estel part 2 ago
Chapter 85: Scanning the church ago
Chapter 85: The Traveler King ago
Chapter 87: At Estel part 3 ago
Chapter 88: Another one join us ago
Chapter 89: Contradiction ago
Chapter 90: At Estel part 4 ago
Chapter 91: At Estel part 5 ago
Chapter 92: The fallen god blessing ago
Chapter 93: Ash and Kana Vs Corrupted Thanatos ago
Chapter 94: Welcome back? ago
Chapter 95: At Estel part 6 ago
Chapter 96: Gift from Earth dungeon part 1 ago
Chapter 97: Gist from Earth dungeon part 2 ago
Chapter 98: Gift from Earth dungeon part 3 ago
Chapter 99: Gift from Earth dungeon part 4 ago
Chapter 100: Night talk ago
Chapter 101: Director of Orphanage ago
Chapter 102: Crystal spawning block and peculiar portal stone ago
Chapter 103: Second Housey and Birdy (Pterodactyl) ago
Chapter 104: Crystal factory ago
Chapter 105: Before leaving ago
Chapter 106: Leaving Malsia ago
Chapter 107: Mermaid kingdom ago
Chapter 108: Rean register with the adventure guild ago
Chapter 109: First request part 1 ago
Chapter 110: First request part 2 ago
Chapter 111: Ash vs Mahsuri ago
Chapter 112: Suspicious Muse ago
Chapter 113: And getting another job once more ago
Chapter 114: Angelic and Devil ago
Chapter 115: Claude's advice ago
Chapter 116: Kiserre ago
Chapter 117: What to do ago
Chapter 118: Ash vs the replacement guild master ago
Chapter 119: Assignment part 1 ago
Chapter 120: Assignment part 2 ago
Chapter 121: Saint Louis and The Saga, Khamishah ago
Chapter 122: "Sick" ago
Chapter 123: Infiltrating Kiserre's castle part 1 ago
Chapter 124: Persistent fever ago
Chapter 125: Infiltrating Kiserre's castle part 2 ago
Chapter 126: Forces ago
Chapter 127: Preparation ago
Chapter 128: Orphanage under attack part 1 ago
Chapter 129: Orphanage under attack part 2 ago
Chapter 130: Kiserre's castle under attack part 1 ago
Chapter 131: Kiserre's castle under attack part 2 ago
Chapter 132: Orphanage under attack part 3 ago
Chapter 133: Orphanage under attack part 4 ago
Chapter 134: Kiserre's castle under attack part 3 ago
Chapter 135: Kiserre's castle under attack part 4 ago
Chapter 136: Orphanage under attack part 5 ago
Chapter 137: Orphanage under attack part 6 ago
Chapter 138: Kiserre's castle under attack part 5 ago
Chapter 139: Kiserre's castle under attack part 6. Plus, Lara and Nara ago
Chapter 140: Orphanage under attack part 7 ago
Chapter 141: Orphanage under attack part 8 ago
Chapter 142: Aftermath ago
Chapter 143: Hectic ago
Chapter 144: Dream? Vision of future? ago
Chapter 145: Going to court? ago
Chapter 146: Ash vs Khamishah ago
Chapter 147: Pull the weed, plant a tree ago
Chapter 148: Artificial blessing ago
Chapter 149: Orphan in Achalasia ago
Chapter 150: Sworn ago
Chapter 151: Moving forward ago
Chapter 152: Upgrading Housey, and a fairy? ago
Chapter 153: Avery and Calypso ago
Chapter 154: Khamishah visiting the training hall ago
Chapter 155: Siblings "taking" a D rank request part 1 ago
Chapter 156: Siblings "taking" a D rank request part 2 ago
Chapter 157: Birthday ago
Chapter 158: Bobunny ago
Chapter 159: Thinking about birthday present ago
Chapter 160: Challenge dungeon part 1 ago
Chapter 161: Challenge dungeon part 2 ago
Chapter 162: Challenge dungeon part 3 ago
Chapter 163: Challenge dungeon part 4 ago
Chapter 164: Challenge dungeon part 5 ago
Chapter 165: Challenge dungeon part 6 ago
Chapter 166: Challenge dungeon part 7 ago
Chapter 167: Seeing them ago
Chapter 168: It's fun here in the orphanage ago
Chapter 169: Announcing the debutante party ago
Chapter 170: Brainstorming session ago
Chapter 171: Young Saintess Rumia ago
Chapter 172: Conversation with the first prince ago
Chapter 173: Claude can now go out freely ago
Chapter 174: Sir Ceanu Reaves ago
Chapter 175: What others are doing ago
Chapter 176: Tour around the neighborhood part 1 ago
Chapter 177: Tour around the neighborhood part 2 ago
Chapter 178: Mirage ago
Chapter 179: Siblings thinking of birthday present part 1 ago
Chapter 180: Siblings thinking of birthday present part 2 ago
Chapter 181: Siblings thinking of birthday present part 3 ago
Chapter 182: Siblings thinking of birthday present part 4 ago
Chapter 183: Brother Ash disappointed ago
Chapter 184: Pistol part 1 ago
Chapter 185: Pistol part 2 ago
Chapter 186: Kucin, Anjin and Filvisar ago
Chapter 187: Filvisar's whereabouts ago
Chapter 188: 6 more days until day 1 of the debutante party ago
Chapter 189: 5 more days until day 1 of debutante party ago
Chapter 190: 4 more days until day 1 of debutante party ago
Chapter 191: 3 more days until day 1 of debutante party ago
Chapter 192: 2 more days until day 1 of debutante party ago
Chapter 193: 1 more day until day 1 of debutante party ago
Chapter 194: Day 1 of debutante party ago
Chapter 195: Day 2 of debutante party part 1 ago
Chapter 196: Day 2 of debutante party part 2 ago
Chapter 197: Day 2 of debutante party part 3 ago
Chapter 198: Day 2 of debutante party part 4 ago
Chapter 199: Day 2 of debutante party part 5 ago
Chapter 200: Day 2 of debutante party part 6 ago
Chapter 201: Day 2 of debutante party part 7 ago
Chapter 202: Day 2 of debutante party part 8 ago
Chapter 203: Day 2 of debutante party part 9 ago
Chapter 204: Day 3 of debutante party ago
Chapter 205: Behind the scene of Day 3 of debutante party ago
Chapter 205: Young Diana and Linda's resurrection ago
Chapter 207: What happen 100 year ago ago
Chapter 208: Angel ago
Chapter 209: Let help clean up the neighborhood ago
Chapter 210: Saint Louis plan ago
Chapter 211: Escape ago
Chapter 212: Saintess Angela ago
Chapter 213: Aries, Kara and Mara part 1 ago
Chapter 214: Aries, Kara and mara part 2 ago
Chapter 215: Aries, Kara and Mara part 3 ago
Chapter 215: Again, mystery of the ancient tunnel ago
Chapter 217: Embassy ago
Chapter 218: Direction they're heading part 1 ago
Chapter 219: Direction they're heading part 2 ago
Chapter 220: Red Lion, Sachmis ago
Chapter 221: About Singa and Farhah ago
Chapter 222: Vincent, Maria and the fallen god ago
Chapter 223: Treating Ash and Filvisar ago
Chapter 224: A witch, a Seraph, and an Iblis ago
Chapter 225: Going to holy palace? ago
Chapter 226: Ash vs Anjin&Kucin ago
Chapter 227: Sending them off ago
Chapter 228: They are coming? ago
Chapter 229: A scream ago
Chapter 230: Going to holy palace part 1 ago
Chapter 231: Going to holy palace part 2 ago
Chapter 232: Prelude to the succession war ago
Chapter 233: Whether it was justifiable ago
Chapter 234: Launching a surprise attack ago
Chapter 235: Have you? ago
Chapter 236: The adventures are having a meeting ago
Chapter 237: Mysterious regress beastly transformation ago
Chapter 238: Going to holy palace part 3 ago
Chapter 239: Going to holy palace part 4 ago
Chapter 240: Rean vs Karon ago
Chapter 241: About tye serial killer dwarf ago
Chapter 242: Faris and Faizi inn ago
Chapter 243: Saint Louis and Saintess Angela ago
Chapter 244: Bait ago
Chapter 245: Vs man-eating pig ago
Chapter 246: From top to bottom ago
Chapter 247: The first saint and saintess ago
Chapter 248: Kucin vs Serial killer dwarf ago
Chapter 249: Racial magic ago
Chapter 250: Saint Louis vs everyone ago
Chapter 251: Meeting it once again ago
Chapter 252: Estel vs Serial killer dwarf vs True Beastman Group ago
Chapter 253: Estel vs serial killer dwarf vs True Beastman Group part 2 ago
Chapter 254: Stopping the fallen god awakening part 1 ago
Chapter 255: Stopping the fallen god awakening part 2 ago
Chapter 255: Estel vs serial killer dwarf vs True Beastman Group part 3 ago
Chapter 257: Estel vs serial killer dwarf vs True Beastman Group part 4 ago
Chapter 258: Stopping the fallen god awakening part 3 ago
Chapter 259: Stopping the fallen god awakening part 4 ago
Chapter 260: Estel vs serial killer dwarf vs True Beastman Group part 5 ago
Chapter 261: Estel vs serial killer dwarf vs True Beastman Group part 6 ago
Chapter 262: Stopping the fallen god awakening part 5 ago
Chapter 263: Stopping the fallen god awakening part 6 ago
Chapter 264: Estel vs serial killer dwarf vs True Beastman Group part 7 ago
Chapter 265: Estel vs serial killer dwarf vs True Beastman Group part 8 ago
Chapter 266: Devil invasion, sign of fallen god awakening ago
Chapter 267: Damage after the fight ago
Chapter 268: Welcome back. Where's Ash? ago
Chapter 269: Conversation with Goddess Achalasia ago
Chapter 270: Raging water magician, Charlotte ago
Chapter 271: Current state of orphanage ago
Chapter 272: Devil army ago
Chapter 273: The beginning of devil invasion ago
Chapter 274: Marriage ago
Chapter 275: Invasion of the corrupted sea beast part 1 ago
Chapter 276: Invasion of the corrupted sea beast part 2 ago
Chapter 277: Invasion of the corrupted sea beast part 3 ago
Chapter 278: Invasion of the corrupted sea beast part 4 ago
Chapter 279: Going to mermaid kingdom part 1 ago
Chapter 280: Going to mermaid kingdom part 2 ago
Chapter 281: Going to mermaid kingdom part 3 ago
Chapter 282: Going to mermaid kingdom part 4 ago
Chapter 283: Going to mermaid kingdom part 5 ago
Chapter 284: Going to mermaid kingdom part 6 ago
Chapter 285: Going to mermaid kingdom part 7 ago
Chapter 286: Going to mermaid kingdom part 8 ago
Chapter 287: Going to mermaid kingdom part 9 ago
Chapter 288: Mara and Zerolith ago
Chapter 289: The ten commanders of the devil ago
Chapter 290: Another faction? ago
Chapter 291: Meddling third party ago
Chapter 292: Stubborn ago
Chapter 293: Truth or lie ago
Chapter 294: Conversation with the Ice Dragon part 1 ago
Chapter 295: Conversation with the Ice Dragon part 2 ago
Chapter 296: Savel's new power ago
Chapter 297: Old unmarried princess ago
Chapter 298: What will I do with this? Part 1 ago
Chapter 299: What will I do with this? Part 2 ago
Chapter 300: What should I do with this? Part 3 ago
Chapter 301: What should I do with this? Part 4 ago
Chapter 302: Asking for help ago
Chapter 303: Family argument ago
Chapter 304: Consequence ago
Chapter 305: Information regarding the holy beasts ago
Chapter 306: Lazing around ago
Chapter 307: A gift for scholars ago
Chapter 308: Improving the model ago
Chapter 309: Departure ago
Chapter 310: Where did they come from? ago
Chapter 311: Wedding preparation part 1 ago
Chapter 312: Mara, Zerolith, Singa and Savel pre investigation ago
Chapter 313: Another day off ago
Chapter 314: Searching for The Holy Beast of Earth, Tyrant Ant Drant part 1 ago
Chapter 315: Searching for The Holy Beast of Earth, Tyrant Ant Drant ago
Chapter 316: Wedding preparation part 2 ago
Chapter 317: Searching for The Holy Beast of Earth, Tyrant Ant Drant part 3 ago
Chapter 318: Searching for The Holy Beast of Earth, Tyrant Ant Drant part 4 ago
Chapter 319: Searching for The Holy Beast of Earth, Tyrant Ant Drant part 5 ago
Chapter 320: Searching for The Holy Beast of Earth, Tyrant Ant Drant part 6 ago
Chapter 321: Searching for The Holy Beast of Earth, Tyrant Ant Drant part 7 ago
Chapter 322: Searching for The Holy Beast of Earth, Tyrant Ant Drant part 8 ago
Chapter 323: Searching for The Holy Beast of Earth, Tyrant Ant Drant part 9 ago
Chapter 324: Searching for The Holy Beast of Earth, Tyrant Ant Drant part 10 ago
Chapter 325: Hardship of marrying a hero ago
Chapter 326: What their enemies are doing part 1 ago
Chapter 327: What their enemies are doing part 2 ago
Chapter 328: Exiting the Beast Challenge Dungeon ago
Chapter 329: Where do we go next ago
Chapter 330: Aries, Kara, Mara and Motra's little brother ago
Chapter 331: Bond of orphans part 1 ago
Chapter 332: Bond of orphans part 2 ago
Chapter 333: Bond of orphans part 3 ago
Chapter 334: Update from scholars part 1 ago
Chapter 335: Update from scholars part 2 ago
Chapter 336: Update from scholars part 3 ago
Chapter 337: Searching for The Holy Beast of Wind, Rampaging Garuda part 1 ago
Chapter 338: Searching for The Holy Beast of Wind, Rampaging Garuda part 2 ago
Chapter 339: Searching for The Holy Beast of Wind, Rampaging Garuda part 3 ago
Chapter 340: Searching for The Holy Beast of Wind, Rampaging Garuda part 4 ago
Chapter 341: Searching for The Holy Beast of Wind, Rampaging Garuda part 5 ago
Chapter 342: Searching for The Holy Beast of Wind, Rampaging Garuda part 6 ago
Chapter 343: Searching for The Holy Beast of Wind, Rampaging Garuda part 7 ago
Chapter 344: Searching for The Holy Beast of Wind, Rampaging Garuda part 8 ago
Chapter 345: Searching for The Holy Beast of Wind, Rampaging Garuda part 9 ago
Chapter 346: Searching for The Holy Beast of Wind, Rampaging Garuda part 10 ago
Chapter 347: Searching for The Holy Beast of Wind, Rampaging Garuda part 11 ago
Chapter 348: Searching for The Holy Beast of Wind, Rampaging Garuda part 12 ago
Chapter 349: Battle at the New Headquarters part 1 ago
Chapter 350: Battle at the New Headquarters part 2 ago
Chapter 351: Battle at the New Headquarters part 3 ago
Chapter 352: Battle at the New Headquarters part 4 ago
Chapter 353: Searching for The Holy Beast of Wind, Rampaging Garuda part 13 ago
Chapter 354: Battle at the New Headquarters part 5 ago
Chapter 355: Battle at the New Headquarters part 6 ago
Chapter 356: Battle at the New Headquarters part 7 ago
Chapter 357: Battle at the New Headquarters part 8 ago
Chapter 358: Battle at the New Headquarters part 9 ago
Chapter 359: Battle at the New Headquarters part 10 ago
Chapter 360 Battle at the New Headquarters part 11 ago
Chapter 361: Battle at the New Headquarters part 12 ago
Chapter 362: Battle at the New Headquarters part 13 ago
Chapter 363: Battle at the New Headquarters part 14 ago
Chapter 364: Aftermath of the Battle at the New Headquarters part 1 ago
Chapter 365: Aftermath of the Battle at the New Headquarters part 2 ago
Chapter 366: Aftermath of the Battle at the New Headquarters part 3 ago
Chapter 367: Aftermath of the Battle at the New Headquarters part 4 ago
Chapter 368: Rite of the Avery part 1 ago
Chapter 369: Rite of the Avery part 2 ago
Chapter 370: Rite of the Avery part 3 ago
Chapter 371: Rite of the Avery part 4 ago
Chapter 372: Rite of the Avery part 5 ago
Chapter 373: Rite of the Avery part 6 ago
Chapter 374: Rite of the Avery part 7 ago
Chapter 375: Rite of the Avery part 8 ago
Chapter 376: Rite of the Avery part 9 ago
Chapter 377: Battle inside the Forest Dungeon part 1 ago
Chapter 378: Battle inside the Forest Dungeon part 2 ago
Chapter 379: Battle inside the Forest Dungeon part 3 ago
Chapter 380: Battle inside the Forest Dungeon part 4 ago
Chapter 381: Battle inside the Forest Dungeon part 5 ago
Chapter 382: Battle inside the Forest Dungeon part 6 ago
Chapter 383: Battle inside the Forest Dungeon part 7 ago
Chapter 384: Battle inside the Forest Dungeon part 8 ago
Chapter 385: Battle inside the Forest Dungeon part 9 ago
Chapter 386: Ash? Vs Estel part 1 ago
Chapter 387: Ash? Vs Estel part 2 ago
Chapter 388: 11 days until Rean's wedding ago
Chapter 389: 10 days until Rean's wedding ago
Chapter 390: 9 days until Rean's wedding ago
Chapter 391: 8 days until Rean's wedding ago
Chapter 392: 7 days until Rean's wedding ago
Chapter 393: 6 days until Rean's wedding ago
Chapter 394: 5 days until Rean's wedding ago
Chapter 395: 4 days until Rean's wedding ago
Chapter 396: 3 days until Rean's wedding ago
Chapter 397: 2 days until Rean's wedding ago
Chapter 398: 1 day until Rean's wedding ago
Chapter 399: Day of wedding ago
Chapter 400: Ash? Vs Estel part 3 ago
Chapter 401: Ash? Vs Estel part 4 ago
Chapter 402: Ash? Vs Estel part 5 ago
Chapter 403: Ash? Vs Estel part 6 ago
Chapter 404: The real wedding day part 1 ago
Chapter 405: The real wedding day part 2 ago
Chapter 406: The real wedding day part 3 ago
Chapter 407: The real wedding day part 4 ago
Chapter 408: The real wedding day part 5 ago
Chapter 409: The real wedding day part 6 ago
Chapter 410: The real wedding day part 7 ago
Chapter 411: After the wedding ago
Chapter 412: Offering a solution ago
Chapter 413: Sachmis, The Red Lion once again ago
Chapter 414: Direction ago
Chapter 415: Just take a day to rest! ago
Chapter 416: Helping Charlotte part 1 ago
Chapter 417: Helping Charlotte part 2 ago
Chapter 418: Helping Charlotte part 3 ago
Chapter 419: Our suspicions ago
Chapter 420: Where we are heading next ago
Chapter 421: Their thoughts on the relationship ago
Chapter 422: Lyrue ago
Chapter 423: Night before departure part 1 ago
Chapter 424: Night before departure part 2 ago
Chapter 425: Morning before departure part 1 ago
Chapter 426: Morning before departure part 2 ago
Chapter 427: Departure to Lyrue ago
Chapter 428: Going to Lyrue part 1 ago
Chapter 429: Going to Lyrue part 2 ago
Chapter 430: Going to Lyrue part 3 ago
Chapter 431: Going to Lyrue part 4 ago
Chapter 431: Trouble in Estel part 1 ago
Chapter 432: Trouble in Estel part 2 ago
Chapter 433: Going to Lyrue, traversing Mountain dungeon alpha part 1 ago
Chapter 435: Going to Lyrue traversing through the mountain dungeon alpha part 2 ago
Chapter 436: Trouble in Estel part 3 ago
Chapter 437: Trouble in Estel part 4 ago
Chapter 438: Going to Lyrue, Traversing the Mountain Dungeon part 3 ago
Chapter 439: Going to Lyrue, traversing Mountain dungeon alpha part 4 ago
Chapter 440: Trouble in Estel part 5 ago
Chapter 441: Trouble in Estel part 6 ago
Chapter 442: Going to Lyrue, traversing Mountain dungeon alpha part 5 ago
Chapter 443: Going to Lyrue, inside Mountain Kingdom part 1 ago
Chapter 444: Trouble in Estel part 7 ago
Chapter 445: Trouble in Estel part 8 ago
Chapter 446: Going to Lyrue, inside Mountain Kingdom part 2 ago
Chapter 447: Going to Lyrue, inside Mountain Kingdom part 3 ago
Chapter 448: Trouble in Estel part 9 ago
Chapter 449: Trouble in Estel part 10 ago
Chapter 450: Going to Lyrue, inside mountain kingdom part 6 ago
Chapter 451: Going to Lyrue, inside Mountain Kingdom part 7 ago
Chapter 452: Trouble in Estel part 11 ago
Chapter 453: Trouble in Estel part 12 ago
Chapter 454: Going to Lyrue inside Mountain Kingdom part 7 ago
Chapter 455: Going to Lyrue inside Mountain Kingdom part 8 ago
Chapter 456: Trouble in Estel part 13 ago
Chapter 457: Trouble in Estel part 14 ago
Chapter 458: Going to Lyrue inside Mountain Kingdom part 9 ago
Chapter 459: Going to Lyrue inside Mountain Kingdom part 10 ago
Chapter 460: Trouble in Estel part 15 ago

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Moon Wolf 96
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Interesting premise, but couldn't read due to Grammar issues

Reviewed at: Chapter 2: World of Achalasia

I tried to get through the first chapter and had to give up due to the grammar issues. Might want to look into getting a beta reader or even just a free grammar program like Grammarly to help fix the issues.

Quantum_Mechanic
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I couldn't get through half of the first paragraph, this is unreadable at this point in time. If anyone can work through this they have the patience of a saint and/or the mental fortitude of a brick.

SonnyChiba
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Like a RAW from a Chinese LN as of Sept, 17, 2019

Reviewed at: Chapter 17: Lesson learned

Hmmm.... the author is not a native user of English.  The grammar is all over the place, sentence fragments, odd word choices, stilted dialogue. 

However I do like stories of this kind, reincarnated isekai, help the orphans, defeat the wicked and powerful etc. 

The characters so far have been fairly generic but it can be hard to tell inner dialogue and motivations with the overall writing being so unclear. 

If you are really in the LN genre and have read google translated raws and thought they were okay then this might be for you. 

SageBahamut
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Truly unreadable. Interesting concept ruined by reading like it came straight out of Google Translate, maybe with another language or two in between.

B.Reyes
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Bogged down by willful shallowness

Reviewed at: Chapter 21: Achalasia Externa

this one had a really nice premise, but the lack of depth to the story and character really bring down the overall quality. The world was interesting. Floating worlds connected by dungeons, Gods, nobility crumbling with corruption, it really was interesting. But, the whole thing just feels naive.

SAmai
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Tepiggo
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Honestly, this looks like the type of story that I would browse Royal Road for a good hour or two to find. Unfortunately, the grammar is so bad that it hurts my eyes to read. Don't get me wrong, from what I can decipher it looks like a good story, but until it gets a rewrite, I'm not going to read past chapter 6. Its just not fun for me to read something that is this sloppily written.

Snoek
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Terrible English, to the point where it's unreadable even to another non-native English speaker.

Author also doesn't take the effort to correct mistakes, when pointed out.

I don't understand why this is trending, how can anyone enjoy reading this? 

Rabid Fan
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Very rough around the edges, gets better but takes ages.

Reviewed at: Chapter 61: Getting the water crystal part 5

What we have here is a mixed bag of blessings and painful to read.

You can actually follow the story if you dont get hung up over things like grammar , logical character introductions and common sense.

True fans of the OP MC faction will enjoy the very descriptive scenes of monsters and shallow sidekicks with cliche villians thrown in to really make it "isekai" but its real focus like the title says is as an Orphanage .. Psyche.. yeah this concept could be better.

The sidekicks or "Orphans" are not introduced very well and so far I wouldnt let the MC look after a dog let alone 10 kids, clearly the writing gets better over the chapters.

Slice of monster hunting actions and some really interesting background worldbuilding via politics was forced a little but acceptable and gave this book a little more depth which it surely needed.though would prefer it wasnt so info dumped.

Not my pick for book of the year , HOWEVER do keep an open mind and this should serve as a very good example of how the writing has improved throughout each few chapters getting better.

My advice is to follow the author , and maybe read this book if you can get past the rough bits.

JayQue
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Read till chapter 5. The English is bad. Struggle to make sense of a lot of sentences. It might improve in more recent chapters but I couldn't.

@author, I'd recommend following the normal conversation layout - "I want to go home" said Ash. It makes multiple people talking easier to read. And try read your story once over after you write so it makes sense to you