Opening an orphanage in another world

I tried to get through the first chapter and had to give up due to the grammar issues. Might want to look into getting a beta reader or even just a free grammar program like Grammarly to help fix the issues.

I couldn't get through half of the first paragraph, this is unreadable at this point in time. If anyone can work through this they have the patience of a saint and/or the mental fortitude of a brick.

Truly unreadable. Interesting concept ruined by reading like it came straight out of Google Translate, maybe with another language or two in between.

Hmmm.... the author is not a native user of English.  The grammar is all over the place, sentence fragments, odd word choices, stilted dialogue. 

However I do like stories of this kind, reincarnated isekai, help the orphans, defeat the wicked and powerful etc. 

The characters so far have been fairly generic but it can be hard to tell inner dialogue and motivations with the overall writing being so unclear. 

If you are really in the LN genre and have read google translated raws and thought they were okay then this might be for you. 

this one had a really nice premise, but the lack of depth to the story and character really bring down the overall quality. The world was interesting. Floating worlds connected by dungeons, Gods, nobility crumbling with corruption, it really was interesting. But, the whole thing just feels naive.

Read till chapter 5. The English is bad. Struggle to make sense of a lot of sentences. It might improve in more recent chapters but I couldn't.

@author, I'd recommend following the normal conversation layout - "I want to go home" said Ash. It makes multiple people talking easier to read. And try read your story once over after you write so it makes sense to you

Terrible English, to the point where it's unreadable even to another non-native English speaker.

Author also doesn't take the effort to correct mistakes, when pointed out.

I don't understand why this is trending, how can anyone enjoy reading this? 

1.  The author is too naive... cant even create a "right" persona at diff person... like the gods...do you even believe that mortal's spirit can pressure a god?   Here-

   Ash's Scythe

    

   The first Scythe weapon on World of Achalasia, it's a gift from God of Death to Ash, created with part of Ash parents soul after they pressure the god of death itself, it had become an intelligence weapon that will grow alongside it's user. Can only be used by Ash or those that Ash had approved.                    ------------- - - - - - - -  and the consept of "good" and "bad" has deep meaning that only an experience people may understand...and the author is obviously NOT one of them...

2. This work has a grade no diff. Than that of WATTPADS ... obviously un experience author... and the english too messy. Thoug im not am english neative speaker too i have read enough to know the diffs.
3. There is NO power building ! Its like he just straight up got his power- forget bout those naive gods...their just part of "plot" to acquire- i mean to easily acquire the power that the author desire for his MC...
4. if you continue reading this untill the latest update then your a "dwarf" ... the most simplitic being that describe like a "muscle-brainer" ...congrats

This ain't a 5 star story but I feel compelled to rate it five stars cause stupid morons with poor comprehension can't piece words together. This is extremely no where as bad as they make it out to be. I've seen far far worse and even stories with great grammar be outdone in complexity and character by my shampoo bottle.

Anyhow story is very meh. The op abilities are a dead give away to low writing skill. It's pretty much op slice of life adopts kids with forced action tossed in. Not awful but rather bland.