My Martial Spirit is System

My Martial Spirit is System

by Lorale

Zhen Lun was called 'trash' just because he was unable to advance further. Many people mocked him for his uselessness.

However, with his strong will to get stronger, he managed to breach his bottleneck.

He managed to breach into the Spirit Condensing Realm and obtain his Martial Spirit.

His Martial Spirit was a mysterious one. He neither heard or seen something like this before.

It was a transparent screen that displayed words and pictures. It called itself System.

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The cover is not mine, the credit goes to MikeWe

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I'll be honest with you guys, The System is not user-friendly, it doesn't care about the user. For more information about the system, please stay with me until the end.

 

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Not bad at all just gotta get past that the author is not writing in their native language. Other than that it's a fun read. Especially if you like the idea of a cultivator having a system that threatens to kill the mc if he doesn't do what the system wants him to do.