Nova Vitam; A New Life in a 'New' World

by Witiko

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Fantasy GameLit High Fantasy Magic Male Lead Non-Human lead Portal Fantasy / Isekai Reincarnation
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content
  • Traumatising content

An indie programmer, down on his luck and betrayed by his ex, is given a second chance by an unknown force. Reborn in another world, he will be the one to shape it to his liking.

 

BACK FROM HIATUS! I'll upload at least two chapters a week, but I'm getting off of a set schedule. Thanks for reading!

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JeanDRacc
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Insane and Pawproved! ( ◐w◐ )

Reviewed at: Chapter 4: Experience Gained

A very well written story about a little guy that grows alongside a heroine called Marion. Too many spoilers so I will keep it like that. I will add that he gets some vampire skills. 

The story is good till the available chapter, I am waiting for more to give a more detailed idea of the plot in the story. 

Characters: Marion, Sarah, Jon, Chris, Lyn... well, the most important ones are basically Jon and Marion, although I like sarah being in the side a bit more than marion. maybe because he grew up with her. Characters are well defined, even the ones that aren't... relevant. 

Story: good enough at the moment, with bits at the evolution. It even uses Esuna, so I as a FF lover like this addition. 

Style & Grammar: no errors found, wasn't searching for them, and it reads and flows extremely well. 

Conclusion: check it out, it won't byte or bite.  

Last Plan
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Rating this story five stars to both encourage the author, and to spite their self-deprecating comments in the hiatus-post.

ChimeraBoi
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The story and the characters are great and it's really promising if the story keeps going like this then it'll be a fun thing to read

Dodikdov
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Delicious~ Delicious~ Delicious~ Delicious~ Delicious~ Delicious~

Kefi
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I dropped it at chapter 12, it may have improved later.

A typical reincarnation story with a MC who's already well on his way to be overpowered.

With some interesting and quite dramatic ideas for the opening act, this story has utterly failed to evoke any emotions as I was reading it.

Even the MC seemed uninterested by his fate.

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 To conclude, I found the story average (which I will admit is unfair of me since I quit in the beginning stage), it's OK to pass the time while waiting for your favourite stories to update if you can somehow relate to the MC.