May Aien Have Mercy

by Shiryu

Original ONGOING Action Drama Fantasy Tragedy Grimdark High Fantasy Magic Reincarnation Strategy Supernatural Villainous Lead
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There once was a man without a name. Despite his circumstances, his kindness and righteousness knew no bounds, rightfully earning him the title of 'The Mentor' from his peers. He was one of many slaves that allowed the majority to live comfortably at the cost of their well being. Yet, the man known as Mentor had never resented the Gods or destiny for his circumstances.

Until even his own beliefs began to crumble under this cruel reality.

An escape attempt had ended in failure, resulting in a vicious punishment that led to the man's demise.

He was finally able to welcome the sweet release of death but fate had other plans for him. Reincarnated into a different world, he was filled with new hope for the future. He'd assumed this to be his just reward and chance at a good life. Alas, he didn't know how whimsical fate could be. Realizing how his new future shaped out to be, caused endless despair to fill him.

Faced with the injustice of his two lives, the man known as Mentor, who was reborn as the human Michael, fell from grace. The accumulated hatred within him was finally released upon the world and none will be spared in the wake of his flames of vengeance.

Thus, if you dare follow Aien on his road of destruction, leave behind your morals and witness the birth of a Demon.

 

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NeonDust
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Behold True Evil...

Reviewed at: Chapter 26

One of the best executions of a traumautic past on a novel i have ever read!!The emotional turmoils are captured exquisitely well!The author uses a slow tempo to build up emotional situations without making them seem cringey at all!LOVED IT!

th30dor
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Dark and depressing

Reviewed at: Chapter 4

Really dark and depressing. If you are in the mood for something like that, go for this story. Otherwise stay away. Good writing.

Yay
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I love it, man! Before continuing, I will remind you that English is not part of my native language, so sorry for the inevitable mistakes I will make next. So first of all I will leave for the extension of this novel that I loved. It was such an amazing time that until now I feel speechless. This book is a masterpiece. Unfortunately, I do not see so many comments ... This novel, arrested me from the beginning to the end of so much excitement and twists ... The perfection man, I highly recommend reading.

BinLox
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I can't stop reading!

Reviewed at: Chapter 23

My heart. Oh gods, my heart. It's like reading Warlock in a Magus World, but far better. If I had the option, I would pay for advance chapters - and I've never done that for any book, with the sole exception of I Shall Seal the Heavens. It's that good. Keep it up, Shiryu. I love what you're doing.

Kiro
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This Novel is Godlike

Reviewed at: Chapter 27

This Novel is Godlike, and worth reading. 

Story - An interesting story, with all you would expect from a anti-hero. Even has many plot twists, that you don't expect. 

Style - Flows extremely well. Don't feel it's too slow or rushed. 

Grammer - Perfect.

Character - Main Character has great development. The side characters are not half baked ideas, and is very detailed. 

 

Let me repeat. I do not know what the MC will do next. The twists and turns are damn good. 

However, be prepared for traumatic experiences. It does have physocological element. 

ChimeraBoi
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The story is good and i like the way it's going.

The way that aien interacts with others is fun to read since half the time when it's not stated im wondering if hes pretending or if he's being genuine with how he's speaking and interacting with other characters.

his past's making him who he is are good aspects that show how he's made the decisions he made and how they influence his future ones and i like how it's done.

The grammer is fine if there are any mistakes i either did'nt notice them or they weren't enough of an issue to bother me

Its a good read and i think the authour is doing good with this and hopefully the story keeps this up

gachiHYPER Clap
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Dark, twisted and amazing

Reviewed at: Chapter 31

This is not a novel for the feint of heart, and it fully lives up to its premise. If you are looking for your basic antihero crap this is not it, Aien is a true vilain that never fails to surpise me with his actions. Overall This story is amazing full of twists that feel as if they were planned from the very begining, yet I rarely saw any of them them coming.

10/10.

Radd
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I did not expect to find this and im glad i did, thank you for this new world to explore Shiryu. 

Atreivahavi
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More like have mercy upon poor Aien :(

Reviewed at: Chapter 31

Story starts like a match fire. A glorious staring and a then goes downhill, it seems. But the real fun starts after that. You say there is a lot of senseless shit, how can mc can be like that, i have already read this kind of novel with similiar overmind korean-like mc etcerera. Even I thought dropping it after all. All of that came a logical conclusion at the end or beginning whatever you say. But the real fun starts after that. Don't drop until you read till chapter 31. I assure you not like one of the stories you have ever read.