So I'm a cat, what now?

by weakman54

Original ONGOING Comedy Fantasy GameLit LitRPG Magic Male Lead Non-Human lead Reincarnation Slice of Life
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It seems I've reincarnated into a fantasy world as a cat. What now?

This is my first publically published story, and I would love feedback in any form as I have no idea how well the quality of my writing holds up.

This story will have light litRPG elements, though I won't dig into numbers much, since I don't enjoy fiddling with them.

The tone will be generally light, and I willl probably try to throw some comedy in there as well. The beginning will be Slice of Life, and unless I come up with a longer plot that I like it will stay that way. 

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Emil Elthammar
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Captures an experience of being a human mind in a cat's body.

I don't read that many stories but this was pretty intriguing. Some parts felt like "Oh they are doing another cat thing." but  overall I think you captured essence of how it would be to experieince the world as a human mind in a cat's body. There are some parts where the "phasing" gets a bit weird for me. These parts felt a bit rushed or general compared to the rest of the story. For example: "I kept moving around, marking and sniffing things as I went." Felt undefined in time and space and less descriptive than the paragraphs before and after. After reading Chapter 1 I feel like I want to know more about what is going on and what will happen next.