Heroes of Midlaris

by KurtMKing

Original ONGOING Fantasy High Fantasy Male Lead Multiple Lead Characters Reincarnation School Life Slice of Life Strong Lead
Warning This fiction contains:
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After a long, exhausting day at work, where he faced the usual harassment from some of his coworkers, Luke just wanted to return some books to the library, head home, and rest. Instead, he died on the way and became reincarnated into the world of Midlaris, a world of myth and magic. There, he was found and raised by seven elders, who each taught him their craft as he grew up.

When he turned sixteen, he began to attend university in the nearby kingdom, beginning a tale of love and friendship, of creativity and growth, and of an ancient past that begins to return.

The first several chapters covers his childhood, for those coming to read about him at university.

Posting Schedule: Alternating between 2 days and 3 days (so two chapters in a 5-day period). Patrons can read up to 15 chapters early.

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Nice character progression

Reviewed at: Chapter 0027

This is a gem of a story. The main  character is op but, that is countered by his lack of knowledge. Not only that but it is problem up by the POV of several different sources.  It is a nice touch to the story of reincarnation that they find there past lovers. That fate and love bridge us across time. 

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Great New Fiction!

Reviewed at: Chapter 0018

I am thoroughly enjoying HOM!  I was reading on RR, but liked the story so much, I had to join Kurt's Patreon to get more!  The characters are developing at a good pace along with the story line.  Keep up the good work.  Looking forward to many more chapters!

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Very enjoyable Slice of Life with some cherries on top.

Reviewed at: Chapter 0031

As of chapter 45 (patreon):

As a preface, I find this to be one of the better reincarnation stories I've read, with an interesting take on how it would work, and I strongly reccommend checking this one out. 

At the beginning of the story, I found Jason to be wildly overpowered and a bit out of place. I'm glad to say that this has calmed down significantly, as he has found antagonists of similar power, and every other main character isn't nearly as unbalanced as he is. The story has really developed well as it's gone on, little things that annoyed me at the start are long gone, and I enjoy Kurt's writing style. 

My only gripe with the story right now is that it seems a bit directionless. There's obviously a plot unravelling and it's started to drive the story a bit harder, but right now the story seems to kinda dart between different, maybe-connected, events, and sometimes struggles to stay on pace. It makes tons of sense as a slice of life story, but the growing (sub?)plot makes me want a bit more direction. This gripe is rather minor and really only a personal preference, but worth writing down, I think.

Keep up the great work Kurt.

char good but op-ness is a bit much at the start, grammar good, like the style, story is good but could use some more direction


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Best reincarnation SoL

Reviewed at: Chapter 0021

Better version of Magi's grandson, reincarnation isnt a huge inconvenient thing like other books.

MC is gay, but in my opinion, its fine, not going overboard

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A story worth the time to read

Reviewed at: Chapter 0018

From the moment I started reading this story I was hooked. I love medieval fantasy stories and it's cool to see one where magic is common place and you just need to will it to happen (if you know how).

If you're looking for a new story to read, give this one a chance.

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Awesome story and looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewed at: Chapter 0009

Style: Great story so far and enjoy how the author is able to pull you in and keep you wanting more from chapter to chapter.  I look forward to seeing how this story plays out.

Story: Story is still the early stages with building up the story line but if the author continues down this path like several of his other stories this is going to be another good one.

Gammar: No issues notated

Characters: The author does a great job describing his characters just enough to visualize and continues to build up the personality and the general makeup as the story develops.  I like how the author is not afraid to put in characters that everyone can relate to even when other writers shy away to keep a fan base. 

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hooked line and sinker. i really want to know what happens next.

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Excellent Story from a favorite Author

Reviewed at: Chapter 0001

This story will grab you right from the first chapter and keep you wanting more. 

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Really good, premise is kinda copied, but takes a very different approach and is beautifully written. The character personalities, interactions and everything are very noice, though mc is pretty overpowered as of right now. Usually I hate that, but the story is so fucking good that it pretty much completely trumps everything bad.

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another magical mystery tour

Reviewed at: Chapter 0001

Think young-adult and abused, then dead, then reincarnated...WTH?

Enter a world with magic, sages [ummm, really?], nobles and commoners, and a new world...mix them altogether and see what happens.

OK now, turn the pages and lets begin an adventure to...