Eh! Where Did My Pen... Pen... Go!?!
School's out for summer! And for Michael, it couldn't have come at a better time. Suffering from the heartache of a bad break up, Michael sought a place to escape into. In steps his Big Sister Cara to save the day with a suite of Golden Tickets; she just so happens to be one of the big winners of a very special lottery. Yup, and now they're off into the magical virtual world of Abrynth with the promise of "A new world, A new life." But little does Michael know just how true those words will hold... and the big loss in store for him.
Warning: The following story is inspired by light novels, anime, and mangas. (Nope, nothing new here, at least I don't think there is, other than the author (yours truly)) It is meant to be a simple, easy to read, fun, light-hearted adventure through a virtual fantasy world. Plus, it's my first time writing like this... so please be aware that there will be mistakes made along the way... so I invite you to enter the dragon and enjoy your time in Abrynth.
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A really nice light hearted funny story.
The characters so far are interesting aswell and the mc is cute. Maybe we are even able to see yuri later down the line *giggles* My hopes never die ;D
The grammar, flow, and writing structure is above rrl standards.
The only thing to complain about at the moment would be the fighting scenes they are really notthat good.
I really recommend it, cant really go wrong with this one.