Eh! Where Did My Pen... Pen... Go!?!

by Storymask

Original ONGOING Adventure Comedy Fantasy Gender Bender LitRPG Magic Slice of Life Steampunk Virtual Reality

School's out for summer! And for Michael, it couldn't have come at a better time. Suffering from the heartache of a bad break up, Michael sought a place to escape into. In steps his Big Sister Cara to save the day with a suite of Golden Tickets; she just so happens to be one of the big winners of a very special lottery. Yup, and now they're off into the magical virtual world of Abrynth with the promise of "A new world, A new life." But little does Michael know just how true those words will hold... and the big loss in store for him.

Warning: The following story is inspired by light novels, anime, and mangas. (Nope, nothing new here, at least I don't think there is, other than the author (yours truly)) It is meant to be a simple, easy to read, fun, light-hearted adventure through a virtual fantasy world. Plus, it's my first time writing like this... so please be aware that there will be mistakes made along the way... so I invite you to enter the dragon and enjoy your time in Abrynth.

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Hyeon
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Next to all the dark stories this is a good change :)

A really nice light hearted funny story.

The characters so far are interesting aswell and the mc is cute. Maybe we are even able to see yuri later down the line *giggles* My hopes never die ;D

The grammar, flow, and writing structure is above rrl standards.

The only thing to complain about at the moment would be the fighting scenes they are really notthat good.

I really recommend it, cant really go wrong with this one.