Something Otherworldly!

by Hazel_Quill

Original ONGOING Action Fantasy Mystery Romance Female Lead High Fantasy Magic Secret Identity Strong Lead Supernatural War and Military
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The change brought magic to earth.

For eighteen years old Freya Archer it was time for her supernatural awakening. It will determine whether she was light or dark, a daughter of heaven or hell.

The children of the original supernaturals will get their magic awakened at the age of eighteen deciding their fate. While getting your fate decided at the age of eighteen with no choice could be somewhat annoying it was how the world worked.

There were rules, the rules of the gods and demons agreed upon the truce. And they had to be followed. But of course.. something otherworldly had to happen during her awakening.

Something strange was going on with supernaturals, and she seemed to be in the middle of it all. Rules are going to be damn hard to follow.

After all destruction tends to follow wherever she goes...

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JammieDodgers
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I have just read up to the latest release (chp14) and I am liking what i've read so far.

There are a few minor grammatical mistakes and a couple typos but nothing bad enough to detract from the story.

The angels have the typical (kinda) snobby justice attitudes which is often used to portray the forces of light. While it isn't anything original, it is still entertaining stuff. As for Freya, at this point she is still a complete mystery but I like her character and look forward to what happens next.

While the chapters are a little on the short side, the (currently) rapid release rate more than makes up for it.

Keep up the good work!