Gaia's little Gamer

Gaia's little Gamer

by Pef

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content
  • Traumatising content

The planet is under attack and Gaia is in desperate need of help.

Evil gods, demonic corporations, and devils in human form. 

All that stands against them is...Pef. 

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First: I absolutely love this story despite my 'honest' ratings. 

Second: This is no story for one that doesnt like Harem, Grinding or self-inserts, because it has (at least hints) of them.

Third: Lets commence the rating.

Style:  Enjoyable Read, very funny at times and not boring to read. Bit short chapters thought.

Story: Interesting idea for the driving plot, but doesnt focus on it or some more in depth stuff that one would like for a original story.

But it doesnt need that, in my opinion. Its Its light-hearted, funny, got enough plot to not be total slice-of-life but the explanations are short enough to not be remembered by the next paragraph ^^ 

Grammar: Not native speaking, and didnt see any big errors. So, perfect score from me here.

Characters: As already 'warned' in the beginning, the MC has hints of self-insert but else, is a functioning human being  more than some in other stories ^^ 

Side characters are a bit glossed over or not existent, but those that are mentioned are also Human(oid) enough. 

 

Also, prepare for a lot of farming ^^ 

 

To my fellow readers: Give it a try for some casual read, i enjoyed it enormously.

To the author: Keep up the good work, i expect more chapters and more farming ;) pls