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On planet Hexia we follow a young boy. A seemingly normal boy who is just trying to improve his family's living circumstances. But what started off as a simple struggle to make his family live a better life might turn into something way more complex than that. Follow him as he keeps discovering more, and more about planet Hexia, his family, and the game Pandora that changed his, and his family‚Äôs lives forever.

 

 Release date: Every 3 days at 21:00 (gmt +1). 

 

 

 


This is my first attempt ever to write something like a light novel, so please be patient with me.
Also please help me by giving me constructive criticism that can help me be a better writer and a better person.
All chapters old, and new might change as the story goes to make it even better, because this is my first novel and I still have much to learn.(I write 10 chapters ahead compared to the chapters that are uploaded, this is what a mean with *new*).

PS, I am also open to any name suggestions for the characters, as I am not that great in making chinees names.


Thank you for reading my long rant, and hope to see a lot of helpful things in the review section.


Love and peace to you all!

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Don Daryl Bonnema

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