I Just Wanted To Die But Instead I Became Immortal

by Nyanako

Original ONGOING Adventure Drama Fantasy Horror Female Lead High Fantasy Male Lead Mythos Portal Fantasy / Isekai Supernatural
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Bridget Bridges has lead a meaningless life. She was nothing but a burden on those around her, so she decided to end it all. Throwing herself into the river, she wakes up on a distant shore. Now, it seems no matter how many times she gets herself killed, she can't seem to die. Trapped in a savage world with her final means of escape taken from her, she fails to cope.

Stacy the Vampire was on a mission to wipe out a local tribe of lowlifes. However, she finds something unexpected. A tasty suicidal immortal.

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I saw that there was no review here, so I let this one to give my opinion. It's simply too fast. There is absolutely no character or world building, the storytelling feels rushed and basically it's not really good.

Then again, the grammar isn't bad, even good for this site, and the idea in itself is not a bad one, I just wish there was an attempt at writing a story because what I read is sinply a plan for writing one.

  • There is also an overeliance on deus ex machina in the last chapter with character that go from friend to enemy in the time of a paragraph.