Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Mystery Anti-Hero Lead GameLit Low Fantasy Magic Male Lead Martial Arts Non-Human lead Ruling Class Secret Identity Slice of Life Strategy Strong Lead
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Alex, a runt of a litter from a well-known family, enjoys a slow life as a Hunter.

 

After witnessing a rogue God's terrible act, he sacrifices his body to protect his friends.

 

His fall became the start of his rise, as he set out to hunt a God.

 

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This is my first novel as an imaginative writer, the writing style may improve or change as the novel progresses, but for those who will wait and read the novel as I improve, you have my gratitude.

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I like the story so far, the pacing is good and the characters all feel real.

The story switches from past tense to present tense quite a lot so I suggests choosing in what tense you want to write and sticking to it.

Flashbacks and scene changes are sometimes confusing and you try to dump too much information on the reader all at once.

The pace is a bit too fast but that is only my opinion.

Gonna keep reading for now :)