Perpetual War

Perpetual War

by CardForge

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore

For thousands of years, the Primordial Towers stood with their secrets. The world looked on with curious eyes until the cracking of the first led to millions of deaths.

The nations of the world fight to take control of the other Towers and use the power to rise above the pits of conflict, their actions causing the land to be engulfed by unspeakable horrors.

After countless centuries none can remember the start nor see the end. The wisest souls have chosen death before birth, yet far more continue to grow up to enter the slaughter.

Among this endless cycle stand four young souls set to enter the fray to end all wars:

The sniper who fights for survival at the chance for freedom

The captain that wants to fix the world to his image

The ace pilot clinging to the azure sky

And the mechanized driver eager for death

Each of them connected through their powers as espers, fighting for separate nations trapped in Perpetual War.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter One: The Test ago
Chapter Two: Encampment ago
Chapter Three: Mission Briefing ago
Chapter Four: Competition ago
Chapter Five: To the Front ago
Chapter Six: Mud of the Trenches ago
Chapter Seven: Observations ago
Chapter Eight: Face to Face ago
Chapter Nine: Retaliation ago
Chapter Ten: Beginning ago
Part Two: Chapter One - A Brief Detour ago
Part Two: Chapter Two - Route ago
Part Two: Chapter Three – Escape ago
Part Two: Chapter Four - The Acolyte ago
Part Two: Chapter Five - Supply Camp ago
Part Two: Chapter Six - Eve Before Battle ago
Part Two: Chapter Seven - Glodan Fields ago
Part Two: Chapter Eight - The Price of Battle ago
Part Two: Chapter Nine – A Conflicted World ago
Part Three: Chapter One - The Calm ago
Part Three: Chapter Two - Recruitment ago
Part Three: Chapter Three - The Journey North ago
Part Three: Chapter Four - Emotions ago
Part Three: Chapter Five - Passing Through ago
Part Three: Chapter Six - In The Distance ago
Part Three: Chapter Seven - The Next Step ago
Part Three: Chapter Eight - Departure ago
Part Three: Chapter Nine - Another Task ago
Part Three: Chapter Ten - Bravan ago
Part Three: Chapter Eleven - Magical Oddities ago
Part Three: Chapter Twelve - An Old Thrill ago

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A great story of fantasy and war set in a land that evokes Russia and Eastern Europe around the time of the World Wars. If I had to compare it to something I might go with Fullmetal Alchemist for the war and army theme.

Amazing art at the beginning of every chapter sets the tone and give you the feel of what's to come, and it's backed up by good prose and storytelling. I love the main character and her giant 'pet' - a huge beastly bird that is a partner and friend to the protagonist.