The Shadow Paradigm - Book 1: Project Orb Weaver

by MelodieRivers

Original ONGOING Adventure Contemporary Psychological Sci-fi Female Lead Low Fantasy Male Lead Multiple Lead Characters Mythos Strategy Urban Fantasy
Evolution is a faultless surgical process. There is no room for mistakes, sentiments, and weaknesses. The strongest rises above insurmountable obstacles, step upon the weak, and is rewarded with sovereignty over even time itself. That is the Law of the Universe. And it's a law that Randall, Abraham, Ysadora, and their fellow Shiakar Paradigm Society members, bring upon a weakened and chaotic humanity.

Their plan seem to go well until a mysterious string of numbers appears in the dreams of eccentic eidomorph Gabzryel. He and his friends, siblings Madzistrale and Tom, will then journey to a city of glass unknown to them, and attempt to prevent the SPS's ultimate evolutionary step: Doomsday. Homeless care center? Wildlife rescue and sanctuary? These ordinary heroes does it all; but soon they understand one thing about humanity: compassion and kindness is a dying sentiment in a world in dire need of order.

Which side will prevail? A faultless evolution that will bring humanity dominion over the stars? Or kindness bringing humanity closer to the Heavens?


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