An Animal in Sheep's Clothing

by Mauger

Original HIATUS Action Adventure Fantasy Dungeon High Fantasy LitRPG Non-Human lead Portal Fantasy / Isekai Strong Lead
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content
  • Traumatising content

Synopsis: A simple nature-loving young man from 21st-century earth, is brought to a foreign world. Will he be able to survive a hostile world where sword’s, magic; mythical creatures are a part of every day?

 

Disclaimer: The image used as my cover, image is a free stock image from pixels.com that is not copyrighted. 

This is my first novel and a hobby. I do not know how consistent my releases will be, but I will do my best, that is all I can promise. I’ve made a story board with ideas for a good portion of the novel already, I do not plan on having voting decide the course of the novels’ story but I am willing to change my novels’ story as it develops and critiques and comments come in on the quality of it. Constructive criticism is welcomed, thank you for taking a look at my novel.

  • Sincerely Mauger
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Peculiarflame86
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An update to my old review! As of chapter 9 and 10, dialogue has been sanded down to a smoothness comparable to... something smooth? Bad metaphor I know. Anyway, it's a story deserving its four stars. Characters have gotten more developed and have motives and, more importantly, Emotional responses! They are people who do people things. Like us! Bad at comparisons I am.

Point is, author has shown a commitment to both the story, and their drive to improve. 

Will re re review at a later time, most likely chapter 20ish