Re; Hell Gate

by TheCrow

Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content
  • Traumatising content

Leiu, 24-years-old, is a person who is struggling between finding a decent job with regular income and providing care for his family. After spending a long time working part-time jobs, he finally has enough money to buy the new VRMMO game that's about to be released.

This is a story about his adventures and progress in this new game.

Author's note: Be aware, this story contains drama, tragedy, horror and so on, so I advise to think twice before reading it or else you might regret it later.

WARNING: If you are not a fan of the stories which contain overpowered Main Character, then there is no need to read this.

PS: This story has a direct relation with Once, Human, Now a Parasite. However, you're not forced to read the two stories to understand the plot but it'll still clarify a lot of things later on.

PS2 : This story relies on readers, I'll put a pole and let you vote on what the MC does in certain situations. 
The pole will be back only when I reach where I stopped in the old version.

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DrSuizidmain
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Really nice MMO story with a likeable MC

Reviewed at: The Beginning

It´s a really nice MMO story with a likeable MC. The MC is strong but has to work for his power. He is a badass person in game but there were short scenes in RL where he is a pushover but I hope it doesn´t appear again. Overall a really good story which just started! (As of chapter 47)

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WORTH THE TIME, GIVE IT A GO!

Reviewed at: Black Iron

Strong lead with brain in his head, no meek "i will forgive you" sh*t going on, you kill me then you're in my hit list kind of MC, HELL YEAH BOI! What the damn purpose having strength much stronger than average but being a pushover right? 

The only thing to fix would be grammar (minor mistake) like several words or levels... Ex: lvl 23 in description but lvl 22 in stat graph. Otherwise it is good all around. (up to ch 22)

Beserker-boy
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this was one of the very first books I read on RRL and I was so sad when Thecrow took it down I'm glad it's back 

Rockyzzz
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 Where's the rest. Its actually good why stop it??