Rebirth in a Magical World
by Flying JMW
What would you do if you were reborn inside the Harry Potter Universe. Follow Alexander Fawley's adventures as he is reborn in the Harry Potter world. In this tale, he will have new unique adventure to call his own, And he will discover that the Harry Potter Universe is much greater than he had imagined.
P.S This is my first story, so please leave reviews, to let me know how I am doing, so I can get better. Also J.K. Rowling owns Harry Potter, I simply play in her world.
On a side note, I am curently re-editing the first half of the story. So, you might see grammer mistakes. I am working on fixing the problems, if you can push through to the chapter thirty-five ish the grammer improves alot becuase White Wind has been editing my mistakes.
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Honestly i think this is the best "fanfic" i have ever read, it doesn't just throw the MC into all of Harry's scenarios, instead starting several years earlier than any of the books and crafting an awesome original storyline making use of forgotten side characters and new original characters, heck i'm 43 chapters in and i don't even think i can remember "Harry Potter" be mentioned once.
The only critisism i could even make is a few cases of incorrect grammar and questionable choice of words / phrases that can throw you for a loop, but all the series really needs is a proof reader, and the grammar does improve in more recent chapters as the author has been putting up google docs where the readers can make note of mistakes.
All and all i would highly recommend, this fanfic is awesome, at 43 chapters in we have just reached the end of year 1 with the author mentioning 7 years have been planned, so hopefully we can strap in for the long haul, i look forward to reading everything this author gives us.
Going into this story was a bit of a rollercoaster at first, based on reviews I had rather high expectations but seeing the rather mediocre grammar quickly lowered them.
Yet as I read I found myself blown away by how far beyond this exceeded what I was expecting! the author (not to be rude) is some random dude with no other works and hasn't even been on RR a year and yet he manages to weave fascinating Harry Potter lore and a perfect portrayal of the characters we've all seen in the books into a quality story that remains both unique, lore and timeline friendly and most importantly forces you the spend hours binging the story only to be crushed that you've reached the latest chapter!
I might be a bit excessive saying this, but I believe that with good grammar this story might even contend with the works of Lone or L. Nimbus.
The story is almost original but set in the harry potter universe. The story is not tightly constrained by the harry potter but does tie in events in the books with an original story.
The writting is rather good, the length of chapters are longish but not boring or incoherent (Not a bad length for a book chapter). A couple of spelling mistakes or missing words (very minimal).
The MC's character is easy to read and MC doesn't seem to have to much plot armour so far, most encounters the MC spends time thinking before doing.
I've read a fair few fanfics and this is easily cream of the crop, to the point where I think the author could have adapted it into an original work if they wanted to.
As many others have mentioned, the grammar is not the best, it's more the choice of words than anything but you can understand through the context and they seem to be making lengths to fix this issue.
I can't recommend this story enough, the protagonist is likeable but not perfect, the reincarnation is done in a more original way rather than the usual cut and paste scenarios you tend to see lately and every scenario feels authentic.
I've blasted through the current 76 chapters and am looking forward for more, good job.
It's the best fanfiction i have ever read, and it can fight with the best original stories on this site for the spot of my favorite novel on RR.
A must read if you like the universe of HP, and a good read even if you don't.
The MC is kind of OP, but not to much, i mean his talent is on the level of Voldy, Dumbledore or Grindelwald, so it's still realistic in an HP story.
Obiusly he is not on that level as he is still a kid and he will need yars to grow in a pawerfull wizard.
Love it, and I don't even like Harry Potter!👍
MC is relatable and feels like a real character. World is very fleshed out - author definitely has done his research and has taken Rowling's world a step further with his own world-building.
i like most of the explanations behind some of the decetions and magical mekaniks that we get
be aware there are a few chapters not suitible for asmatics....(had me wheezing with laugther)
For style 5. As it is close to the original but I the gap it is true to its own
For story 5. As a fanfic of one of the most fanficed stories out there this one is original enough to hold its own
For Grammer 3.5. While the mistake Are often you can genarally tell what was intendet
For charrecter 5. The charrecter we know Are true enough reflections of the orriginals that it feels real
TL;DR: It's here. The second novel I like to casually read after Azarinth healer. And it's - again, what a surprise - a light serial novel adventure with slightly OP MC, starts okay-ish and gets better as you progress.
Disclaimer: I deleted my earlier review and wrote this one, because my feelings changed with the latest chatpers.
I like to read Azarinth healer. I'm even a patron for that one, which is something I didn't think I would ever do. See, I'm a skinflint. And, well, this little fanfic has the same general tone.
It's light reading. No stress, no grimdark opressive world kicking the shit out of a grizzled hero/ine so he/she has to eat it with their cereal every morning.
It's a pure escapist wish fullfillment fantasy that borders on unreasonable. That said it still only toes the line for me. There is still a challenge. And the author obviously goes to great lengths to keep it that way, because unreasonable wish fullfillment looses all challenge.
That's exactly why I like reading Azarinth healer and now I'm counting this one there as it's younger sibling. So, for being my little oasis of peace for a few minutes every few days, I'm having you as my second most favourite on this site. Mind you, not for extreme literary excelence, but because you evoke relaxation.
Notice how I didn't call this a fan fiction - this is too good to be a fanfic. It's literally at the level of if not beyond the original HP books. I personally would refer the style and plot of this story to the original. This story is canon to me now. The character development is absolutely amazing and realistic. Literally everything about this novel is at a professional level, I'm not even joking.
The author goes through a lot of effort to keep the HP universe's magic and setting "magical" while at the same time giving more information and explanations about how things work. This dichotomy is one of the best parts of the story.
The slow upload rate is completely justified because it takes a long time to create a masterpiece, and Rowling took years to write the HP books, so you have to extend the same courtesy to the author.
The way this story expands on the HP universe only serves to make the universe better than it ever was before, and the character interactions feel identical to the original HP stories and it feels like JK Rowling wrote this story after she improved as an author.