The Last Prayer

by Graefoxx

Fan Fiction ONGOING Action Drama Harem
Warning This fiction contains:
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  • Sexual Content
  • Traumatising content

Sometimes, all it takes is the right voice to help you realize the greatness within and conquer the painful evil without. Uzumaki Naruto's voice of promise just so happens to be his own... from the future.

Naruto Fanfiction. Warning: Lemons, Moral Ambiguity, Gray Area Decisions, Slow Build, and Harem. Naruto w/ Kurenai, Ino, Sakura, Tenten, Hinata, Temari, Mabui, Samui, and Mei

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kingsfun
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(18+) Its going to be worth the read (<18) come back later

I started expecting very little of a harem novel for naruto but it's well written and gives some depth to characters. The author even goes the extra mile to flesh out characters that are otherwise ignored in most of the original run. It's not for everyone but I think it's worth the read.

Can953
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Starting to read this I had doubts ;Stories that put a harem together in a sensible way are rare. The Last Prayer starts at the beginning of stages of a shounen story, so at this point of Naruto's original story characters werent very fleshed out. Nothing much to work with for the author I thought. I was pleasently surprised.

This is the best fan fic ,which isn't a self insert, I've read so far. I have read many.

Till now (Ch 11) motivations and characters of the people in the story are realistic. Especially if we take the fact the original story had people with extreme character traits in it into account. Chapters are long. Sex scenes are decent

Westwind
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This only gets 5 stars because there is not an 6th

This is probably one of the best fanfiction on Royal Road you can find. With most harems after the MC beds them a few times their personality completely takes a back seat to the MC and they become irrelevant to the story. Like a piece of furniture as the MC moves on to the next conquest. This is not the case everyone has a personality and motives as to why. No one falls over with their legs open for the MC just because plot (so far).

As with most fanfiction I am concerned about the power creep. Also with most Naruto fanfiction after the chunin exams they spin out of control but Graefoxx has earned more than enough credit to see how it goes.

Writer has been  so far very consistent on releases and gave a fair warning when they were taking a short break.

All said give this one a chance try reading the first 3 and if after that you are not sold this may not be for you.

aguzgunz
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very good novel for me

i like naruto to, and this one make my original imagination go wild.. hahaha

lets try read first and leave a comment, keep support author with comment or anything else

thanks bro

epicshade
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This is probably the best fanfiction on royalroad, but instead of taking my word for it just give it a chance and see for yourself.

I went a full night without sleeping to read it all in one go and thank god i had no work the next day.

lamnet
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The Best Naruto Fanfic You’ll Find

Honestly calling this a fanfic feels wrong. It’s just so solid and with so much direction it just feels like a legitimate alternative version of Naruto in writing. A version where Naruto has the balls to work hard and actually protect what he cares about most; and he finds even more to protect in this version. He gains strength through his efforts and we don’t have to see him being tossed around like a baby and saved by plot armor. A version where Sasuke isn’t Kishimoto’s pet favorite (look it up its true) and Naruto doesn’t feel naive when talking about becoming the greatest hokage and protecting those he cares about. A version where each character feels fully fleshed out and where Sakura isn’t such a dumbass (FINALLY). I am legitimately excited to see this progress to the very end and see how Grae developes the story. I haven’t read all of Naruto because I couldn’t stomach his annoying personality but I want to see where this goes. 

Oh if you’re debating whether or not to read this, just read it. I don’t even know that much about Naruto and have to look up characters but it’s been so worth. I’ve become very picky about what I read (bc I’ve read so much: webnovel, fanfic, books) but this is one of two stories I follow on this site. 

Even if you’re having misgivings about the Haram, I’d bet you’d like this. The haram doesn’t feel forced at all and even 900 pages in the foundation for that haram is still being thoroughly built as it should.

Oh and the lemons are great. Actually top tier and well written lemons.

To Grae: Oh and those five stars are all legitimate. Like I can’t reason with myself to take off half a star to make it look legitimate.