World Creators
by HeartPiercingSpear
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One day he installs a new app on his phone.
It's description read
"Create your own world, create & explore various mysteries, all to your heart's content.Install now"
This app changed his life, and in ways he never believed possible.He saw as many things you are inclined to believe and just as many things you might have never thought of.
Come and join in his journey.
Oh! And the name of the app you ask?( well look at the name of the novel at least man) it is the World Creator App. Surprise! Surprise!*wink**wink*
[participant in the Royal Road Writathon challenge]
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Sounds intriguing at the start
Reviewed at: Chapter 1 The Start
Sounds like it could turn into a good fiction, though there are a couple spelling errors, though that could probably be easily fixed.
shows promise
Reviewed at: Chapter 1 The Start
From what I have read along with the synopsis, it is a incredibly interesting story. The problem is that there are so many mispellings and wrong words used that I literally cannot grasp large sections of the book. Now keep in mind that I have only read the prologue and chapter one, so I am seeing the authors spelling at its worst, but that is a serious problem. To the author: you have an amazing idea that can definatly become one of the bigger books if you get some help from a translator/ proofreader/ native english speaker. haVe a good day!