The Line That Separates Them.

by PuffyPyjamas

Original HIATUS Comedy Drama Romance School Life

My name is Kobayashi Miya, a freshman at the 'Haru High School'.

 

To any girl around me, I'm peerless, unparalleled, and superior. They talk to me cheerfully, but I can feel their nervousness and reservation. They share their stories with me, but only to the degree where they think I wouldn't be bored. They talk to me about love, but they've never asked about my take on the matter. 

 

To any guys who look at me from far away, I am unapproachable, unattainable, and unreachable. They confess to me, but none have ever tried to actually come close to me. They panic, stutter and run away.

 

In studies, sports, interpersonal relationships, and most of all, in beauty and elegance. They consider me to be superior, an existence which is too overwhelming to have around, but they still happily do so.

 

But they are completely wrong, I am just a girl. Scared, timid, and naive, and above all else, in love...

 


 

My name is Kawashima Takumi, a freshman at 'Haru High School'.

 

I am just an above-average student you'd find anywhere in the world.

 

My academic abilities are above-average, but not too impressive. My athletic capabilities are above-average, but not too inspiring. My looks are above-average. but not too eye-catching. My existence is that which one could easily live without, but wouldn't mind having around.

 

Or, is that just how I want people to perceive me, while I peacefully wash away my quiet high-school days while being unnoticed and unobserved. 

 

At least, that was the plan, but she just had to enter my life unexpectedly.

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Amazing character development

Reviewed at: Line 20- Masterpiece.

The depth of character is heavily laid emphasis on which helps us connect with them. The storyline is also quite thrilling. The author makes it such that we always wonder how people will react upon realising his true identity.