Ciarra the Cold

by Nyx Wylde

Original HIATUS Adventure Fantasy Female Lead GameLit Grimdark Harem High Fantasy LitRPG Magic Non-Human lead Portal Fantasy / Isekai Reincarnation Strong Lead Villainous Lead
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  • Sexual Content
  • Traumatising content

The gods created a game-like world for their high-stakes contest, and Ciarra is the most powerful of their pawns, she ignores little things like racism, bigotry, and societal norms.

One little foxkin who has lived a hard and brutal life becomes Ciarra's pet. For the first time in years, she has hope, and a chance to follow her dreams.

Assuming Ciarra, an amoral sexual sadist, doesn't kill her first.

Expect DUBCON, lesbian harem, NSFW themes, dark themes with a chance for a brighter future, and dragons eating vanquished foes - both literally and figuratively.

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Well written and kinky.

Overall: 5/5

A villainous female dragon is named a champion of a Goddess and sent on a quest. Along the way she gathers a harem of BDSM-enthusiast slaves to abuse in sexy ways. Expect lots of kinky sex scenes. If you're put off or triggered by rough sex, then this story is not for you.

But if you're a deviant like me, you'll appreciate this excellently written story. As of Chapter 12, it shows a lot of promise. I’ll keep reading and update my review later, once more chapters are posted.

Style: 4/5

Writing style is mostly good, way above average for RoyalRoad.

There are a few instances where I found the descriptions somewhat vague and I wasn’t sure what was going on. For example, during certain sex scenes, actions were being described, but I wasn’t sure what position each character was in. I’d suggest adding a few lines, here and there, to set the scene and describe things more concretely. For example, where each character is standing in the space, how they’re standing, who is sitting on who’s face, and so on.

Story: ?/5

So far, not much of the plot has happened. The chapters I read were mostly just Ciarra being overpowered and establishing the relationship between her and a character she meets early on. What I read so far was excellent, so I'll give it 5/5 for now, assuming that things will stay excellent.

Grammar: 5/5

I wasn’t specifically looking for grammar issues, but I didn’t notice anything. Certainly, nothing that would take me out of the story.

Characters: 5/5

The main characters are all three dimensional and well fleshed out. They have their own motives, goals, reasons for doing what they do. All the characters feel distinct from each other and consistent. Even the harem girls have their own specific kinks and reasons for submitting to their Queen.

MLIA95
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Definetly adult content, but actually good

If you like adult content or don't mind it, this is the story for you. There aren't enough stories like this out there, where the writing doesn't suffer for the subject.