Hells on Earth

by HellsOnEarth

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Horror Tragedy Male Lead Post Apocalyptic
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Traumatising content

Zombies are only the first hell.........

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Mecanimus
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Zombie apocalypse story from a balanced and competent person's perspective.

This is a character-based zombie apocalypse story. It focuses heavily on people as they try to survive a plague that devastates the planet. 

 

Style: the style is simple and clear, which allows the story to flow. The focus is not on the gore but on the thoughts, plans, and feelings of the survivors. The author also uses pictures and maps to illustrate his points.

 

Grammar: besides the odd typo, pretty much perfect.

 

Story: This novel started three weeks ago as I write this review, so the story itself is still a bit bare-boned. There is a very strong focus on the characters though, and on making everything as realistic as possible. There are no incompetent police immediately overwhelmed or screaming retards that act irrationally. This is just your everyday humans confronted with a world going to hell. The experience is visceral and tragic.

 

Characters: This is where the story really shines. The few characters are fleshed out and I ended up caring about them. There are no nerds with incredible karate skills pulled out of their asses or unrealistic bimbos. Those are men and women I feel I could meet in the street and befriend.

 

Recommended for fans of the genre, fans of realistic stories and survival stories.

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Not a blood and guts story. It is focused on normal people attempting to survive an extreme situtation of zombies killing almost everyone.

The characters are believable, are not super heroes and are learning as they go. Making mistakes and building on them.

If you want a story about real people, that is well written and keeps you wanting more... and you like zombies, then this is worth reading.