If We Cannot Grow Old Together

by Mason

Qiaosheng, you are the one who saves me, yet you are also the one who gives me hell. If we cannot grow old together, I'd rather we've never met before.

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 Mation translation or non native English? Either way, the grammar sucks. 3 stars for the effort of making a story.