Devouring The Universe Begins With Reincarnating As a Snake

by Yamir Moon

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Sci-fi Anti-Hero Lead Non-Human lead Reincarnation Strong Lead

Fang Yun has become a snake and got a system, the system requires him to brush up to 10 million reputation values, or face eternal death. So Fang Yun began to crazily upgrade! 


A beautiful outdoor streamer in the mountains, facing the camera and the live friends sending gifts but was caught by a one-meter-long python. 


3,000 meters above the sea surface, Lake Logar is suspected of the appearance of water monsters, causing a large number of tourists to explore. 


On the calm sea, a luxurious cruise ship is slowly moving forward. Visitors stood on the deck as the sea breeze blow. Suddenly, someone found that under the water behind their cruise ship, a black shadow hundred of meters long is following closely.

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Author: banana panting

Translator: YamirMoon

Updates will be on a daily basis, with a least a chapter a day.

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 1: Reincarnated As a Snake ago
Chapter 2: Finding prey ago
Chapter 3: Begins to evolve ago
Chapter 4: Tree lizard ago
Chapter 5: Natural Enemies ago
Chapter 6: Rainstorm is coming ago
Chapter 7: wildcat ago
Chapter 8: Accident ago
Chapter 9: 3rd Evolution ago
Chapter 10: Forest fire ago
Chapter 11: latest findings ago
Chapter 12: smart squirrel ago
Chapter 13: Exploring The Area ago
Chapter 14: The Snake and The squirrel ago
Chapter 15: Expanding Territory ago
Chapter 16: Beauty Streamer ago
Chapter 17: shocked Chen Meng ago
Chapter 18: Getting Reputation Points ago
Chapter 19: Strengthening Determination ago
Chapter 20: New Skills ago
Chapter 21: Crazy Hunting ago
Chapter 22: Fifth Evolution ago
Chapter 23: Seasonal Change ago
Chapter 24: Snatching Prey ago
Chapter 25: Life and Death Battle ago
Chapter 26: Close Escape ago
Chapter 27: Zhang Wei ago
Chapter 28: Encountering The Eagle Again ago
Chapter 29: Bold Action ago
Change of Schedule ago
Chapter 30: GoodBye Xiao Ma ago
Chapter 31: New Nest ago
Chapter 32: Exploring New Territory ago
Chapter 33: Group Attack ago
Chapter 34: Surrounded ago
Chapter 35: Patience ago
Chapter 36: Unexpected Discovery ago
Chapter 37: Fish stealing thief ago
Chapter 38: Monkey Group ago
Chapter 39 Fleeing ago
Chapter 40: Fang Yun counterattack ago
Chapter 41: Honeycomb Trap ago
Chapter 42: Humans in the mountain ago
Chapter 43: Dangerous Chase ago
Chapter 44: Killing Peoples ago
Chapter 45: Looking For King Cobra ago
Chapter 46: Meeting Humans again ago
Chapter 47 Peak Match ago
Chapter 48: Finding Lunch ago
Chapter 49: New Journey ago
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MrHrulgin
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A good concept with poor translation and formatting

The concept has potential, but the grammar and formatting are both rather poor. Each sentence being its own paragraph even when they would benefit from being conceptually linked is rough, making it difficult to read. It reads like a literal translation from some other language, with both word choice and phrasing being quite jarring.

As of chapter 3 the character is very shallow, very much just a snake. If all there is going to be to your protagonist is a snake, why have the snake filled with someone whose entire description was "18 years old, a high school student"? Why not just be a snake?

Koinzell
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The grammar is an atrocity

Some of the worst grammar I've seen in a while, pretty much impossible to read due to it.

Aty marik
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A good story so far, but it's obviously a Chinese translated novel.

While there may be a few grammatical mistakes, it's quite easy to read.

After all I have seen translations way worse than this.

Finally I recommend that you post your novel in WordPress, then link it to novel updates. 

Kanada
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Excellent Story, Needs an Editor

[Read up to C17]

So it's a really fun evolution novel, and I am following it to read more as it comes out. It knows what it is: a story about a snake. It's not trying to be anything it's not. I really like it for that.

I gave it 3.5 stars because it's extremely obvious that English is not the author's first language, and it really shows. Carefully read that sentence, that is not a criticism of their writing but of their ability to express themselves in English. Only years of reading CN and LN let me follow it without too much trouble. 

The author should not take this as anything other than a suggestion to get an editor that has a better grasp on English if that's the language they want to write in.

At this point I recommend this novel to anyone who likes system or evolution novels, with the caveat that you might have to work at it a little to understand what is going on. 

Ihateeverything
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The story is very obviously a chinese webnovel being translate, so of course there are SOME grammar mistakes, usually a word is missing, or the wrong tense is used, but ive seen WAY worse stories than this one

and i know some of you, mich like me, read the bio and thought “A Snakes Rise”, but this story, while still having a snak mc, does a completely diffrent take on it. If you do NOT like the chinese “gamer” fics, you probably wont like this one, cuz it’s pretty much that.

Vald
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Our mc must be popular with a lot of people (10millions) to not die. He is a snake an can easily grow and adapt.

That's interesting and i would like to read more about this project but i cant, the grammar and syntax of the sentences are just horrible. 

Seriously it's hard to understand even basic scene, i stopped at the fourth chapter.

I find the core idea of the novel interesting, so author, if you rewrite or do anything to improve the grammar and everything  pls mp me :) 

Schuldraigh
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Note: I am heavily biased towards odd reincarnation novels. That said, the awkward letter gaps and occasional typo are keeping it from 5 star. For most other aspects, full marks. Good job author, keep 'em coming.

_W_T_F _
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You grammar improved drastically so i give it 4.5

I give this a 4.5 for improving the grammar in latest chapters

I love the story so far still waiting if fang will grow to a titanoboa size 

And am really hype if all the skills he had reach max level will maybe give him next evolution stage too(sorry if english is not that great am from asia)

Yamir
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Good story but can still be polished.

Spoiler: Spoiler

 A good story so far, well enough to change mood from time to time

The style is good but can still be improved.

There isn’t much going in story now, he is still hunting in the jungle to improve his level.

There are quite a few grammatical mistakes, but still good enough to be read and understood. You should work more on it.

Well the MC hasn’ Shown any distinguishing characteristics so far, but I hope that improves over time.

Overall a good read but can still be polished, I will give you 5 stars for now, may change the rating as the story progresses.

Dragonightmare
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love every bit of it so far

I love this story most reincarnates as stories tend to have a problem with making progression not feel rushed I like the way you are balancing early on improvements if this was another story by now he would be 4 times his size have a ton more skills I like those stories but they tend to go off the rails super quick this more steady increments of improvement feel more impactful ill probably update this review later right now the only thing I have not given 5 stars is story simply because I have not seen enough yet and grammar because of translation