Integration

by drac

Original ONGOING Contemporary Drama Romance Tragedy Anti-Hero Lead Female Lead Male Lead Multiple Lead Characters Slice of Life
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Profanity
  • Traumatising content

Lan, forced on his own to a world he can't comprehend is confronted with Saya, his loud, brash neighbor.

He wants nothing more than to be left alone, and she sees him as a project to be solved - to start..

But his wounds may run deeper than she's ready to deal with.

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updates will be once a day for the next seventy days since i am migrating from another platform and have those chapters - and more - ready to go. (from 8/9)

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a recovering disaster? / twitter: @rgdrac

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Take a Journey with the Characters

When you start to read a story here on RR there are certain elements that you come to expect.  Character actions and reactions that are to the point of tropes. Worlds that are copies of one another.

This story is not one of those stories.  Integration is driven by the unique characters that exist in its world. It is easy to hide a weak character behind the glamor of a new shiny bauble, or through adding enough extra characters that they bouy each other from chapter to chapter. Integration relys on only a few characters and develops them, it makes you feel an interest in the tragedy that is their lives and leaves you wanting to know more, to see what they will make of themselves and whether they will successfully integrate with each other and with the world they live in. 

Some stories also play on the readers nerves and emotions by layering mystery upon mystery without giving you a hope of discovering what is going on until you are hundreds of chapters in.  Integration gives you the mystery immediately, but starts to unravel it almost at the same time. Feeding the reader pieces of the puzzle in a satisfying trickle.

Integration is definitely worth reading to experience the journey of the characters within.