Demi-God - A LitRPG

by Eyeeric

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy Tragedy GameLit LitRPG Magic Male Lead Slice of Life Strong Lead
Warning This fiction contains:
  • Gore
  • Profanity
  • Sexual Content
  • Traumatising content

Nel Grinig could not wait for his class to finally be decided. "Class Day" is held at the beginning of each new year, with anyone who is eighteen receiving their class for the first time. The theory is that your class is granted to you by the Eight, the magical Gods of planet Iorin. People believe that they are also the ones to thank for the status screens, status messages, the the unwritten laws of Iorin that are enforced through magic  

Nel trained his whole life to become a dual wielding warrior. He grew up in a poor village and knew he was meant for more. To become rich and take care of his mother, to help people in need, and to become a powerful adventurer. 

Then the Old One got involved, and like most times you try to plan your life out, it went slightly different than he expected.

This will be a crunchy LitRPG story, written by someone who literally has never wrote a book in his life. LOTS of edits will be made, by me, friends, fiance, readers, you name it. My grammar is poor at best, I will get that out of the way now. A DnD DM, LitRPG lover, I had a story I wanted to write, and I look forward to sharing and learning from everyone that follows along with Nel’s journey. 

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MichaelTheWizard
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This book seems good so far. 

Spoiler: Spoiler

 

Elloden
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Ejoying the start of the story. Good first four chapters and a nice pace of updates. Looking forward to seeing where it goes.

Stephen Lewis
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*only read prologue 

This looks like it will interesting 

I will come back to binge read when author posts more 

Pallakonto
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Well written so far if not my cup of tea.

The story is well-written from a language point of view, but the purposely brutal character development found starting in Chapter 15 made me close it immediately.