Six have passed years since Mientheoderic'Cyan arrived at the Dias Brotherhood.
Duty wise, he is now apothecary, healer, and combat chanter. Personally, he is timber bonded and sweetheart to the Brotherhoods only priestess, Kiao. He's been able to maintain his friendship with Soletus'Sheldmartin, the Arch Monk's grandson. However, trouble still has the ability to find him. On the eve of completing his first mission official mission, he starts learning his edict phrase, a chanter's most powerful. And then the real trial begins.
Kiao'Meadowlark knows something is wrong with her bond partner. She felt his anguish from a long distance, something she hadn't felt before. And her suspicions are confirmed when First Warden Kellas'Rook comes back with half his band. Her friends and Mien aren't with him. He claims insurrection, First Warden Oeric'Sheldmartin believes he is lying and wants to find his son. She soon finds herself teaming up with a man she doesn't care for. However, he is the only person to help her get what she wants and as well as uncover the truth of what really happened with Kellas's band.
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However, After I get done posting pt3. I’m going to take a short week break for extra prep time for pt 4, and pt 5.
There will be a two week break between pt 4 and pt 5.
This novel is a sequel to Hy'Ruh-Ha
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The style is as excellent as ever, so if you're looking for a character focused adventure then you are in for a treat!
The story is excellently paced and keeps you in the edge of your seat from the first chapter to the last (or at least the 34th). There are a decent number of moving parts and the author likes you keep you in suspense so expect some cliff hangers. You are put in the shoes of characters who lack a lot of knowledge and you the reader lack that same knowledge which can be either frustrating or exhilarating depending on how well you deal with being left in the dark. I for one thought it was an excellent decide for retaining engagement. Though I did binge read it and thus was never left in a cliff for to long.
The grammar is barely above average for this website, meaning perfectly readable, but you will notice flaws in every chapter. It's not bad, but it is consistent so don't expect it to suddenly improve or get worse later in the story.
The characters are the true star of the show with much of the same strong cast from the last book. Their experiences and emotions are viscerally felt by the reader and it's clear that the author has experienced a similar event in their life. They all have clear voices and distinct personalities which sometimes complement one another or clash in a very real and elvish(human) way.
All in all an excellent read and well worth the time so long as you enjoy character focused stories!