Dragon Marksman

by Bibliophile

Original ONGOING Action Adventure Fantasy GameLit LitRPG Male Lead Martial Arts Strong Lead Virtual Reality

  When a 21-year-old convicted murderer is given a second chance, just how will he put his legendary real-life skills to use in a new world? In a virtual world? How will he find a path of action in a place where magic is commonplace, and where bloodshed reigns?

  Yi Qiang, a professional sniper at the top of the mercenary world, completed his one and only life goal at 21. Trouble was, that goal got him into jail. However, he was given another chance to hone his skills and put them to use when a mysterious suited man called Mr. Yang approaches him with an offer. An offer of a gateway into worlds yet unknown and into a place chock-filled with the only thing that gave him life. A gateway into Ascend.

 

Release Rate: One chapter every Thursday and Sunday, average length of at least 4 pages.

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chakfor
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Well written, but Marty Stu to the max

Basically what the title says. Grammar, story structure, and the gamelit elements are all on point though. The author is putting a good amount of thought and work into the skills and the math behind them. It's not bad, but the MC is so stereotypical that it hurts. He's a loner, he's a giant badass, blah, blah, etc.

I was originally going to go with a 3-star, but I think 3.5 is more appropriate. There's absolutely nothing wrong with the writing or the premise, but it's been done before by many other authors.


tl;dr: Not my cup of tea, but it might be yours. If you're curious I'd say it's worth giving the story a shot but don't expect anything new.

13lack12ose
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Just look at the authors name, how can you not love this story when it's written by someone who loves to read?!

Common trope for a RRL fiction, but the MC is different from your normal generic white male for once.

Give this one a go folks, I'm sure you'll enjoy it :)