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Emily enjoys a simple life playing video games casually and not much else... until she entered Zodiac Online. Witnessing events beyond her she finds herself with a burning desire to become a powerful player. Finding new friends and fighting old ones, she journeys through the world of Zodiac.

 

Chapters are released twice a week at 10pm (AEST) on Sunday and Monday (AUS).  

 

The excellent cover was done by Kiomaru1 !!

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 1: Too Many Rabbits ago
Chapter 2: Attracting ago
Chapter 3: The eternity in a second ago
Chapter 4: Nimble Mage ago
Chapter 5: Cave Dragon ago
Chapter 6: Quest: Dragon’s Legacy ago
Chapter 7: Archy and Third ago
Chapter 8: Exploring the Woods ago
Chapter 9: Control ago
Chapter 10: Magi Guild of Lum ago
Chapter 11: The Team Comes Together ago
Chapter 12: Monster ago
Chapter 13: Ace in the Hole ago
Chapter 14: Corruption ago
Chapter 15: Dark Horse ago
Chapter 16: The Fruits of Her Labor ago
Chapter 17: The Mission Begins ago
Chapter 18: Colt's Crew ago
Chapter 19: Attack! ago
Chapter 20: The Final Battle (1) ago
Chapter 21 Final Battle (2) ago
Chapter 22: The Final Battle (Finale) ago
Important announcement, FAQ, and Q&A ago
Ana's Story: Six Years Ago In Another Lifetime (1) ago
Roxxy and Third's Story: Destruction & Spirit ago
Book 2 Chapter 1: Violet & Trog the Frog. ago
Book 2 Chapter 2: The Library ago
Book 2 Chapter 3: Fighter's Guild of Lum ago
Book 2 Chapter 4: Vs Azeroth. ago
Book 2 Chapter 5: The World Stirs. ago
Book 2 Chapter 6: Challenge. ago
Book 2 Chapter 7: A dumbass and a strategist? ago
Book 2 Chapter 8: Monsters. ago
Book 2 Chapter 9: Equals. ago
Book 2 Chapter 10: The Second Round ago
Book 2 Chapter 11: Seven's Fight. ago
Book 2 Chapter 12: Fear. ago
Book 2 Chapter 13: New Beginnings. ago
Book 2 (Parts 1&2) FAQ, Q&A and Announcement! ago
Book 2 Side Story 1: Goodbye Dark Horse. ago
Book 2 Side Story 2: Violet. ago
Book 2 Side Story 3: Lightning & Ice ago
Book 2 Side Story 4: The Cheshire Conspiracy ago
Book 2 Side Story 5: The Game Masters. ago
Book 2 Side Story 6: Claire & Pascal ago
Book 2 Side Story 7: Zodiac and the Five Miracles ago
Book 2 Chapter 14: Party Planning ago
Book 2 Chapter 15: Dragon Seeking ago

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Alex Storm
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Edit:  A bit of real life is shown as well lately. Better.

It is a very nice story overall.

The characters are thought out pretty ok and I havent stumbled upon any grammatical errors. The vocabulary is good and the style of author is the same.

 

For a vrmmo novel feels nicely done so far, although, at least for me, would benefit from a bit of story time of being outside the game world even if it is for a short period of time. It feels like it may enrich the story further and maybe the line dividing it from vrmmo to... say for ex... transmigrating into a game world.

 

I know we are still kinda in the beginning but on 12 chapters would have liked some out of the game world time... or maybe you (the author) are writing about it in future chapters.

 

Liked the idea with the Attracting character. Have only read few novels who make use of that theme not on the main character. (Can't say more here due to spoilers :P )

 

Dialogue is good.

Action is good.

Story is advancing in a fairly good pace.

 

Overall, it is a good read.

Andross Guile
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It's a great story and it should be read. The only thing that bothers me is the syntax. 

"Affect" is a verb. "Effect" is a noun. There are quite many other mistakes for a story of this quality. I'd say after some editing it'll be a 4.3 star on Amazon.

Francisco Ortega Tejada
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If you are a virtual reality fan then read it. The grammar is good; but more importantly, the history flows smoothly.

kspn
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This is an interesting story, I have throuerly enjoyed it and look forward to mroe coming out. There are some interesting ideas and concepts as far as the Game and Skills go.

jadecriminal
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Book 1 only:
It was pretty decent read. Plot, characters, antagonist. Pretty much a fun ride.

The premise revealed at the end of book one is pretty decent idea, unfortunately a very depressing one. (For me, someone else might just go neat and keep reading, YMMV)

Theoretically things might turn out great but usually when the author piles on the grim, it usually gets more grim, especially since on royal road folks tend to follow Japanese tropes on what a hero should experience.

Can't say how it goes since I'll be skipping book 2.
5/5 since it really was a fun read untill the downer.