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Emily enjoys a simple life playing video games casually and not much else. Until she enters Zodiac Online. Witnessing events beyond her she finds herself with a burning desire to grow stronger and become a powerful player. Finding new friends and fighting old ones as she journeys through the world of Zodiac, follow her journey. 

 

Chapters are released twice a week at 10pm (AEST) on Sunday and Monday (AUS).  

 

The excellent cover was done by Kiomaru1 !!

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Table of Contents
Chapter Name Release Date
Chapter 1: Too Many Rabbits ago
Chapter 2: Attracting ago
Chapter 3: The eternity in a second ago
Chapter 4: Nimble Mage ago
Chapter 5: Cave Dragon ago
Chapter 6: Quest: Dragon’s Legacy ago
Chapter 7: Archy and Third ago
Chapter 8: Exploring the Woods ago
Chapter 9: Control ago
Chapter 10: Magi Guild of Lum ago
Chapter 11: The Team Comes Together ago
Chapter 12: Monster ago
Chapter 13: Ace in the Hole ago
Chapter 14: Corruption ago
Chapter 15: Dark Horse ago
Chapter 16: The Fruits of Her Labor ago
Chapter 17: The Mission Begins ago
Chapter 18: Colt's Crew ago
Chapter 19: Attack! ago
Chapter 20: The Final Battle (1) ago
Chapter 21 Final Battle (2) ago
Chapter 22: The Final Battle (Finale) ago
Important announcement, FAQ, and Q&A ago
Ana's Story: Six Years Ago In Another Lifetime (1) ago
Roxxy and Third's Story: Destruction & Spirit ago
Book 2 Chapter 1: Violet & Trog the Frog. ago
Book 2 Chapter 2: The Library ago
Book 2 Chapter 3: Fighter's Guild of Lum ago
Book 2 Chapter 4: Vs Azeroth. ago
Book 2 Chapter 5: The World Stirs. ago
Book 2 Chapter 6: Challenge. ago
Book 2 Chapter 7: A dumbass and a strategist? ago
Book 2 Chapter 8: Monsters. ago
Book 2 Chapter 9: Equals. ago
Book 2 Chapter 10: The Second Round ago
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Alex Storm
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Edit:  A bit of real life is shown as well lately. Better.

It is a very nice story overall.

The characters are thought out pretty ok and I havent stumbled upon any grammatical errors. The vocabulary is good and the style of author is the same.

 

For a vrmmo novel feels nicely done so far, although, at least for me, would benefit from a bit of story time of being outside the game world even if it is for a short period of time. It feels like it may enrich the story further and maybe the line dividing it from vrmmo to... say for ex... transmigrating into a game world.

 

I know we are still kinda in the beginning but on 12 chapters would have liked some out of the game world time... or maybe you (the author) are writing about it in future chapters.

 

Liked the idea with the Attracting character. Have only read few novels who make use of that theme not on the main character. (Can't say more here due to spoilers :P )

 

Dialogue is good.

Action is good.

Story is advancing in a fairly good pace.

 

Overall, it is a good read.

Francisco Ortega Tejada
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If you are a virtual reality fan then read it. The grammar is good; but more importantly, the history flows smoothly.